all in a dream

dusk arising


entranced aslumber o'er woodgreen moss
chanced whispers call and dance
into a dream a woodnymph trilled
to steal of hearts romance

            gossamer wings paint airy trails
            through twighlight's eerie hue
            where floating fairy fingers lead
            beneath bows of deja vu

            and there a star, a dream fortold
            of love so long subdued                             
            yeilds a clue and stole a heart
            a leaf shaped silver shoe

through carpet green oer tumbled root
bracken thorn and sinued vine
flight of nymph guides light of moon
race of heart and dreams entwine
          
           across the seeds of hope's reveal
           bathed in starlight's mercurial pond    
           the princess of the greenwood dell
           sensed promise of beyond

           upon the shore of restless night
           now a saviour figure stands
           the key of future promise held
           a leaf shape in it's hand

betwixt the realms of nightfalls sigh
and leafsfall daylight's drone
where woodnymph play neath dragons beard
a dream may rest its home

for each sleeping prayer on lip becomes
words of woven quilt to treasure
when midnight creatures fascinations bring
to our slumbers worthy pleasure

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 5th, 2020 04:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: after reposting a couple of oldies from 2017 on here for the last two days i thought i would have a go at getting into that old fantasy frame of mind to write a new one. here it is, hoping its up to scratch.
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  • Saxon Crow

    Quite frankly, I hate you. I am really, really, enjoying these poems DA, they're practically shakespearean!

    • dusk arising

      Shakespear was far more accomplish than I a mere stick rattler. Thank you for your kind words.

    • orchidee

      Good write dusk.

      • dusk arising

        A fine comment Orchidee, thank you.

      • Fay Slimm.

        An impressive poem D.A. The flow and feel of this ballad to dreams has woven a web to teach hearts of romance. A truly delightful and soothing read.

        • dusk arising

          Fantasy and word play from me. Fun to do but rhyming is so limiting. Thanks, glad you enjoyed this.

        • Michael Edwards

          Magic words - a great write DA

          • dusk arising

            Twas brought to me 'pon a woodnymph's breath. Then she farted.

            Thank u kind sir.

          • FredPeyer

            d a, you are a fine poet!

            • dusk arising

              One day i might be somewhere with poetry. At the moment its a bit of a struggle.

            • Clara

              Oh wow, this is like a lyrical visual splendour of pure delight and magic! The skill on this site, blows me away sometimes. Brilliantly done.

              • dusk arising

                There certainly are some high quality poets posting here and they are inspiring. Sadly i see a lot of the younger poets do not read - nor comment upon - other poets work which is a shame for it expands ones horizons.
                Thank you for your very kind comments.

                • Clara

                  Yes, I've noticed that as well. Its a shame because, personally, I think I've grown in my writings since I started posting on here. Reading others work and getting involved is entirely positive.

                  • dusk arising

                    I totally agree with you. That has been my experience too. Encouraging comments have given me confidence to do what i do on here.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    What a wonderful write d a, it is so beautiful to read .
                    It is more than 'up to scratch'.

                    Andy

                    • dusk arising

                      I admit i was trying hard and you know how it is... you can get to the stage where u cant see the wood for the trees, so I was unsure. But judging by comments I'm pleased it was approved of.

                      Thanks again.

                    • Neville

                      Have no fear oh' gallant scribe, ye doth pen magnificently and then some... By Jove sir this is simply splendid... No kiddin, full marks ….

                      Neville

                      • dusk arising

                        It took some time and effort for it's a leap away from the stuff i usually churn out but i really enjoyed it.
                        I'm pleased you enjoyed it, was wondering what u may think.

                        • Neville

                          You are absolutely much more than just welcome I can tell ya...

                          Neville

                        • tundrol

                          Reminded me of a Midsummer Night's Dream.

                          • dusk arising

                            I have heard of that shakespear play but have not read or seen it performed.

                          • tundrol

                            OVER hill, over dale,
                            Thorough bush, thorough brier,
                            Over park, over pale,
                            Thorough flood, thorough fire,
                            I do wander everywhere,
                            Swifter than the moonè's sphere;
                            And I serve the fairy queen,
                            To dew her orbs upon the green:
                            The cowslips tall her pensioners be;
                            In their gold coats spots you see;
                            Those be rubies, fairy favours,
                            In those freckles live their savours:
                            I must go seek some dew-drops here,
                            And hang a pearl in every cowslip's ear.
                            Farewell thou lob of spirits: I'll be gone
                            Our queen and all our elves come here anon.



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