Annie's Poem.


In our lives challenges are thrown at us.

In your life you are facing one,

But you have the strength to conquer it.

Within you is resilience,

I can see it within you,

That purpose to move on in your life.

There are friends around you

Who will be there for you.

I too will be there as always.

I look into your eyes and see,

And see the beauty that is you,

That has always been there.

That beauty will come out

And you will move forward,

Move forward into a better place,

A better place in your life.

Yet in those sad moments

I will still be there,

Be there to listen,

And to pull you up,

Up into your wonderful world.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 8th, 2020 02:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this for a dear friend of mine who is going through a tough time at the moment. She appreciated my words.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 23


  • railasunshine

    This is beautiful. Well done.

  • Goldfinch60

    Thank you rail, much appreciated.

  • orchidee

    An encouraging and supportive write Gold.
    Meanwhile - did ya help me at all in 1066? Or did I muck up the whole thing meself?!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Orchi.

      You did what you always did - ignored my advice, you should have kept your arm by your side instead of pointing up!!


      • orchidee

        Ohh why did I even turn up that day? Why didn't I just stay in bed?! heehee.

      • dusk arising

        Words of encouragement from a good friend who knows love of mankind.
        A true friend, when we don't realise we need one, is a saint in everyday clothing.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you d a, your words are much appreciated, I try my best for all.


        • Saxon Crow

          Lovely poem GF. Sound, wise words

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you SC, much appreciated.


          • Neville

            Splendid and so bloomin appropriate under the circumstances you outline... I am sure your friend will appreciate your words...

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Neville. She was very touched by the words.


            • Michael Edwards

              Great write, andsuper sentiments Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Michael, much appreciated.

              • Fay Slimm.

                When there is a friend to write and offer such caring help in moving forward again who could resist. - -- a comforting feel to the whole read dear Andy.

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Fay, I think it showed her that I care.


                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy ! Annies Song is one of the greatest personal Love Songs of all time. We always include it (and sing it as a Duet) in our talk on JD ! Every one joins in a few rears are shed - awesoem ! Love the concept in your poem - it is one of our mantras ! Alwys look out for folk in need - and when you are in need someone will surely look out for you - AMEN !

                  Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
                  Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you A and B, I always try to help and be there.


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