A good nights sleep won't rest these bones
A holiday won't take me away from where I've roamed
As within this shell time has stripped away any walls
A soul now resides with little emotion to a raise
Waiting and watching on nothing but a drift to arrive
Life truly knows know better and neither can I
Only the beholder will fit through the needles eye
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Riding those waves to another day, keep up the write don't lose the light....thought I'd add some more fun with the vid, always appreciated.
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That needles eye will bring light and wonder into your life.
Andy
Yeah when I stop pricking myself with the wrong end lol..
Always appreciated my friend
Good write and clip Dan.
Thank you for your time good sir, enjoy the weather...
Concentrate on the eye, don't feel a prick! lol
That sounds like a Bruce Lee trick!
Thanks for the smile and time my friend
Just what Jesus said Sir! Great poem Dan
Thank you kindly.
Can't believe you used that word, does that mean I am being spoken too? Although I never heard a voice I don't know 😉
Always appreciate your time my friend, thanks for the sign to write down my next one.
Much peace and respect
What word? Jesus? Ooo I said it again.. Christ! IT must have been divine inspiration!
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Ha ha - - what a great video - -I chuckled at that happy pair - - those dogs sure do move my friend - they must love their run to that sandy paradise....
What a superb video, those dogs love being out with you and so obedient.
Not absolutely sure where you are coming from in your words today but having got to know you through poetry i guess that whatever drifts your way you will tug it through the eye of the needle. That eye will be narrow and difficult some days but wide and welcoming other days...
Stay in contact with your mind.
Great poetry Dan and what a smashing video too...
All Good Things to You and da Family
Neville
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