Needles eye

Poetic Dan



A good nights sleep won't rest these bones

 

A holiday won't take me away from where I've roamed

 

As within this shell time has stripped away any walls

 

A soul now resides with little emotion to a raise

 

Waiting and watching on nothing but a drift to arrive

 

Life truly knows know better and neither can I

 

Only the beholder will fit through the needles eye

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2020 02:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: Riding those waves to another day, keep up the write don't lose the light....thought I'd add some more fun with the vid, always appreciated.
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  • Goldfinch60

    That needles eye will bring light and wonder into your life.

    Andy

    • Poetic Dan

      Yeah when I stop pricking myself with the wrong end lol..

      Always appreciated my friend

    • orchidee

      Good write and clip Dan.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you for your time good sir, enjoy the weather...

      • Michael Edwards

        Concentrate on the eye, don't feel a prick! lol

        • Poetic Dan

          That sounds like a Bruce Lee trick!

          Thanks for the smile and time my friend

        • Saxon Crow

          Just what Jesus said Sir! Great poem Dan

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you kindly.

            Can't believe you used that word, does that mean I am being spoken too? Although I never heard a voice I don't know 😉

            Always appreciate your time my friend, thanks for the sign to write down my next one.

            Much peace and respect

            • Saxon Crow

              What word? Jesus? Ooo I said it again.. Christ! IT must have been divine inspiration!

              • Poetic Dan

                Ha ha ha, really need that chuckle!

              • Fay Slimm.

                Ha ha - - what a great video - -I chuckled at that happy pair - - those dogs sure do move my friend - they must love their run to that sandy paradise....

              • dusk arising

                What a superb video, those dogs love being out with you and so obedient.

                Not absolutely sure where you are coming from in your words today but having got to know you through poetry i guess that whatever drifts your way you will tug it through the eye of the needle. That eye will be narrow and difficult some days but wide and welcoming other days...

                Stay in contact with your mind.

              • Neville


                Great poetry Dan and what a smashing video too...

                All Good Things to You and da Family

                Neville



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