Fay Slimm.

Change.

 

 

Change.    

 

I choose to greet life without resentment, 

sleep beside pain with jubilation

and wake to the thrill of Exhilaration.

 

I want to float in dreams of contentment,   

        walk unknown paths with satisfaction            

and yield to the feeling of Exultation. 

 

My spirit needs more pleasure-excitement      

           I seek bliss of exhilaration                   

so cast me adrift with Change- to-Elation.

   

 

 

Comments11

  • Claudelle DeLuna

    Excellent piece, Fay
    & a big yes to it...
    Have an awesome day,
    *CāœŒ

    • Fay Slimm.

      Delighted you gave a big YES to the posting Claudelle - -- thanking you kindly for your lovely comment.

    • Poetic Dan

      I'm drift to the other side with you! Fantastic stuff!

      • Fay Slimm.

        Good to know you are on board my friend. Great to know you enjoyed the read Dan.

      • Saxon Crow

        Awesomely optimisitc and uplifting Fay. Bring on the world!!!

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ha ha - - yup - bring it on now there has been Change - -thanks a load Crow.

        • orchidee

          It's no change that these are still fine writes Fay!

          • Fay Slimm.

            Ah - - so kind of you to say so dear Orchi.

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            ANGELA HERE - Oooooh FAY - Just a Month to My Wedding (Easter Saturday !) so much to do so little time - and a House to get ready as well ! This Poem was just the *Power of Positive Thinking* I needed ! Ive copied it and I will stick it on My Bedroom Wall !
            I love all the NINE POSITIVES ! Without Resentment - Jubilation - Exhilaration (Thrill) - Contentment - Satisfaction - Exultation - Excitement - Exhilaration (Bliss) & Elation - AMEN ! I was praying for sign that everything would run smoothly - and this is it - Hallelujah ! I may use these NINE words in a POEM is that OK ?

            Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
            Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
            šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›
            NINE Golden Hearts for NINE Golden Words !

            • Fay Slimm.

              Wow - am highly honoured you copied these few lines which will hang on your wall dear Angela - - and of course you can use the words etc........... so pleased you found value in this poem called Change.

            • dusk arising

              Oh take me once again to the stage
              before the crowd where i was reborn
              let my breath and fingers play
              my life and soul through shining horn

              Love your words today and your last verse took me back to the elation of playing music of ones self to an appreciative crowd.

              • Fay Slimm.

                Great the read took you back my friend - - playing in front of a crowd must have been awesome -- am delighted my words helped to bring it alive again D.A.

              • Michael Edwards

                And take me with you - an elating read.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Ah - well climb aboard Michael -- Change of that nature can do us all a power of good eh .........

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful positive write Fay, all things in life are good.

                  Andy

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    I knew the write would appeal to you Andy - - thanks a million for your continued support.

                  • anonymousblue

                    I needed this positivity. A very welcome poem.

                  • myself and me

                    The kind of change I need. Wonderful read.

                  • MendedFences27

                    We should all "greet life" with your optimism. Springtime brings that feeling to most of us.Yet to "float in dreams of contentment" is one of those inner feelings that exist purely in one's heart. A wonderful and exhilarating poem. - Phil A.



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