Enticing.
From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day's entrance shatter dark chains
impeccably.
Breeze stirs black dregs to a finish
as streaks of
morning beget break of new dawn
impressively.
Unsullied azure displays an astute
need for space
by removing glimpsed bits of grey
imposingly.
Sleep flits away, giving me chance
for early
attempt to pen nature's clear gifts
impassively.
Caught in night's shawl is no place
to be when
sun's call entices me outdoors so
impellingly.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Enchanting as ever, taking my mind to me places.
Much appreciated
And your visit and comment is much appreciated too Dan -- thank you so much.
An impeccable, impressive, imposing, etc, poem Fay. Am I flattering now?! heehee.
Many thanks Orchi.
Unlike me lately, you must be an early riser. As a busy bee i was too but rarely able to enjoy the dawn as it seems you do. I'm thinking one of your several muses' must be the your love of natural surroundings.
Here once again you are our lady of the dawns beauty.
So kind and generous as always with your comments and encouragement - - thanking you kindly D.A. - - though dawn-time may not be available for everyone to rise and take in its gifts an early bird's sweet song can bring such delight.
“From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day's entrance shatter dark chains”
Stunning start to a beautiful piece. A breath of fresh air to read and inhale the beauty of the morning light
Thank you so much
What a generous comment from another nature lover and thank you so much for the visit and kind review of my little verse on Enticing.
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! Your Poem tcday answered my Question *How does the enticement of love operate ?* Impeccably - Impressive - Imposingly - Impassively & Impellingly ! Brian & I are finding that there is NO ESCAPE from TRUE LOVE - AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check COVID 19 - Thanks !
Ah - so pleased those single words were taken in and digested with love in mind - thank you dear Angela - - - may the wedding plans go smoothly despite needed restrictions ahead and sending best of good wishes as your special day draws ever nearer.
You're just a complete genius Fay. Another amazing one
oooh - now I am blushing - -- - but am delighted you liked the verse on Enticing my friend.
So much enjoyed as always dear Fay.
Sincerely appreciate your continued encouragement Michael........dawn is a special time for poets like me to be up and outside - - at least when we can.
I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart but it is equally magnificent.
I often think of Celia Thaxter early morn:-
The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet.
Ex animo, Alan
A lovely verse to endorse the comment and thank you for posting it Alan - yes the wondrous break of day inspires many poets and so it should.
Such an elegant, visual poem. Indeed, you've extolled the virtues of one of life's simplest yet biggest pleasures. Well done.
Thank you very much for dropping by and for the generous comment . So pleased you enjoyed the read of Enticing.
That sun's call is magic in our lives.
Andy
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