Beautiful Lives Tanka.

Goldfinch60



 

The path lies ahead

Our lives follow its future

To the land of dreams

Where we will live in wonder

Throughout our beautiful lives.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 19th, 2020 02:30
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  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.

  • Michael Edwards

    Always look forward - not easy at the present time but we must continue to nurture optimism. Another good write.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, as you know I am always optimistic - yes I have enough wine for the future days.

      Andy

    • dusk arising

      Tread that path at moderate pace for the scenery can be amazing, and there's no going back if you dash

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true d a, much appreciated,

        Andy



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