dear reader

dusk arising



 


In darkness
find me.
In shadows
exploring this
haunted tapestry
of memory.

Where  places
I longed to try
met faces,
without goodbyes,
the lipstick
of my mind.

And early
morning tears
water flowers
over clouds,
which reign,
above this life.

As here I play
to rest fights
which never ended.
Again and again.
Save to move
this pen.

Leaving,
before your eyes,
this bleeding
segment of 'me'.
For morning
to light.....

             .........dear reader

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 21st, 2020 01:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Let this beautiful piece of music wash over you before reading.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 59
  • User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.
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Comments4

  • Goldfinch60

    Dear writer
    Your words
    Will dispel
    The sadness
    That Pervades
    Your darkness
    From shadows
    Into light.

    • dusk arising

      I'm unsure about how this piece will go down tbh. Did u think it was depressing... wasn't meant to be.

    • Michael Edwards

      A feast of a read

      • dusk arising

        Hmm is that good or bad. Do you think this is too abstract. I find i write a lot in the early hours and this piece is describing what goes on when i do just that....

        • Michael Edwards

          Good - a great coming together of ideas. Now go get some sleep.😊

        • Neville

          thoroughly enjoyed and for some of us, I am quite sure understandable.. You should see inside my head in the early hours... mildly abstract but wholly congruent, just the way I like em…. Stay safe and well.... Neville

          • dusk arising

            Thanks Neville, reassuring to read your comment. It seems i got plenty of readers but few prepared to comment. Scarey LOL.

          • Poetic Dan

            The music can after but I must say I found a spirit in my while reading that will not sway, it plays the fight for endless days!

            Great read my friend!

            • dusk arising

              Thanks Dan, I think this one went way over most readers heads.



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