My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions

Neville

My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions

 

Who am I

If not my fathers son

 

Where do I fit in

Now that my fathers gone

?

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 26th, 2020 04:09
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 42
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Comments8

  • dusk arising

    A young man's question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.

    I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!

    • Neville

      Ha.. when all this is over DA, remind me to buy you a drink... No kidding..

      Neville

    • orchidee

      Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
      I never knew we could be so may things!

      • Neville

        All things to many men Stephen.. or summat like that.... maybe

        N 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x

        • Neville

          Bless you dear Fay a much appreciated visit and true.... x

        • Michael Edwards

          Questions I still ponder - clever write.

          • Neville


            Cheers Michael

            Neville

          • PoeticBiscuit

            Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.

            • Neville


              What can I say other than a sincere thank you PB.. a much appreciated visit my friend... Stay safe out there 🙂

              Neville

            • Laura🌻

              Neville,

              You fit exactly where you want to fit...
              in your children’s heart and soul!

              ~Laura~🌻

              • Neville

                What a bloomin delightful and otherwise heart-lifting response... thank you so much my friend....

                Neville

                • Laura🌻

                  My comments are due to the vibes I get from your writings and from the comments you make to other poet’s writings. 😊🌻

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                • Christina8

                  I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....

                  • Neville

                    I know where you are coming from Christina and how lovely to hear from you... Stay well my friend 😎👍

                  • Goldfinch60

                    My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father's influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
                    You are still your father's son.

                    Andy

                    • Neville

                      Bless you my golden friend, and long may you continue to shine.... take care and stay well.....

                      Neville



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