Gold Vision.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Gold Vision.

 

From cool mist of dawning      

re-lighting the hill

as breeze stroked old pine trees

I caught a gold vision.

 

From inside autumn woods

the fall of long legs

broke no spell of silence  

as new venture beckoned. 

 

From moist patches of leaves

ears cupped to listen

and as head fell to browse

I saw young horns glisten. 

 

Wide eyes pierced the shadow          

sniffed something not right        

then lithe as quick silver

dived that deer out of sight.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 9th, 2020 05:57
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Comments6

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    Wonderful brush with Nature Fay very well captured

    • Fay Slimm.

      Great that you enjoyed the tribute to one small deer who appeared like a gold vision thank you Andrew for your visit and comment

    • Neville

      Mr. Andrew C. Forrest took the words right out of my mouth, so he did...

      Lovely Fay and true

      Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        Great minds they say think alike Nev and am honoured two gentlemen thought the same - -- my efforts to bring such a beautiful creature to readers is my delight........ thanking you kindly and more my friend................. x

      • orchidee

        A lovely write Fay.

        • Fay Slimm.

          So pleased you enjoyed the read dear Orchi.

        • dusk arising

          Painted vivvidly as ever with sophistication of your unique brush strokes..... i watched this scene unfold as the breeze raked those trees.
          Can't but think you live in a idyllic spot surrounded by such marvels. Or is it all in your mind?

          • Fay Slimm.

            Well lots of my writing is based around places near where I live D.A. and wild deer live in nearby woods but I have not seen them as I do not go there at dawn - - but I have met a man who does just that so my poetic mind weaves a spell around what he has seen......... hope this answers your question - and thank you so much for your supportive interest in my efforts with words.

          • Michael Edwards

            Took me to a time and place that , in these difficult times, can only be seen in dreams.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Too true Michael - but we need dreams like this to lift up our spirit as we face what may come as a result of planet-abuse. Nature at least has stayed true to itself.

            • Goldfinch60

              I could see that deer in your words Fay. It is so wonderful to sit in silence and see those deer.

              Andy



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