Baiting.
Let us go baiting the moon tonight, rave
to tunes of extra mystique.
If we lose shy in silky glitter-white haze
we shall regain fresh replete.
Come mesh skins in rippling amusement
while moon bejewels the lake.
Dive to find quivers of midnight allure
as diamanté distils moon-lace.
Come welcome waves of zephyr-arousal
and gyrate to naked pleasures.
Try some lunar obeisance and unashamed
start moving to togetherness.
So let not this you-and-I moment go by
as we attempt moonlight baiting tonight.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A strange notion overtook my pen after viewing the image above - thought I would post the result hoping it brings a few smiles...........
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tempted, hooked, played n landed .. feels so good..
just hope that come the morrow I aint gonna feel gutted.....
perfectly penned my friend....
Ha ha - - Glad yous feelin' good after goin' moon-baiting amigo - but know that water-baby'll offer the same tomorrow........... x
Oohh, you gonna rave now?! I might try a bit of that sort of raving too! Naked pleasures? Swoon! I might try a spot of that too, A dark horse I am! heehee.
Put up that red Notice of Absence - Orchi away on some naked pleasures. lol.
Ah those carefree days of youth.... still in the mind but the flesh is.... erm well its wrinkled, flabby and besieged by aches and pains.
All i can manage is to bay at the moon physically. But i was there mentally reading your fine words today.
More than a smile, your words make the heart ripple
Great funloads - can I join in?
Ha ha -- Yes of course Mike providing you play the mermaid at her own game.................
BRIAN HERE FAY - Good Evening ! Thanks for informing us - that the Picture was your MUSE ! It happened to me once - frightening !
Sister Moon is always a source of Inspiration ! being a MAN I always treat Her with a Velvet Glove ! *Baiting the MOON is anathema* HOWEVER your cool lyric does bring LILY LUNA down to earth - just like NEIL ARMSTRONG & BUZZ ALDRIN did when they walked all over Her in 1969. Buzz referred to Her as the *Magnificent Desolation* !
Your *Ode to Luna* does make Sister Moon feel like a close Friend who is capable of a litthe baiting by her fellow Sisters including Yourself ! So let us all attempt a little *Moon Baiting* tonight !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
The moon is there for us to bait and in many ways the catch that we get from the moon are words written like yours Fay.
Andy
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