giving you
all i could
and taking
all you offered
I cried for you
lied for you
worked this
aching body
for you
begged of you
learned from you
suffered
and you pulled
me through
loved for you
brought new life
to you
and still
there is
nothing
i wouldn't do
for you
love of you
runs through me
through and through
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dusk arising (
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Such a strong emotive write d a, it resonates.
Andy
Thanks Goldfinch, yep you'd see the meaning in this one straight away.
A fine write dusk.
Alive? Ain't no one alive in EastEnders. They're all made of wood! lol.
Thanks, Eastenders is the adult version of the woodentops.
Mr Potato Head is still in it (Phil Mitchell). lol.
A strong write and a compelling read great work dusk
Cor! Compelling is a nice word, thank you sir!
Thanks DA for sharing a Poem of Total Committment to ones LOVER ! I hope & pray that in 2045 (Silver Wedding) Angela & I will be able to say that about each oher ! Love the VIDEO - Very haunting !
Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela 💜💜💜
Nothing to do with a lover. The clue is in the title.
Thanks for your comment DA ~ I guess I should have been more abstract in my Comment. YES We are borh in love with life ~ BUT been married make our lives infinitely better and hopefully in the not too distant future will will produce that NEW LIFE you poem talks about. It was just our personal interpretation of the POEM ~ OK
Love - Life & Joy this fine day !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
The poem is all about the love for life itself, maybe it will make more sense. So many miserable buggers around always complaining... not my style, i don't do much, want much nor have much but i love life.
Well needed reminder! Thank you
a very much enjoyed poem DA..
Not sure how I managed to miss it till just now.. Neville
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