THE STRANGER
Lanes and passages
Byways courtyards and alleys
Hidden labyrinths
Verbal directions
Impossible attainment
Resigned abashment
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: May 12th, 2020 00:51
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THE STRANGER
Lanes and passages
Byways courtyards and alleys
Hidden labyrinths
Verbal directions
Impossible attainment
Resigned abashment
Comments7
This reads as one might describe my mentality whilst playing monopoly. What use a 'get out of jail free' card when your waterworks are throwing a double six?
Love the dexterity of vocabulary.
Thanks dusk.
A fine write and pic M.
Re Monopoly: It's got silly now. There are skyscrapers in some versions of it. If anyone else lands on them, they've had it - the Rent is a fortune!
You know Mon O. Polly Berles? (Mon = Monica?).
Mona Sylla Berle?
The mind can get so lost until you resign to your own normality.
Andy
Some say I'm not normal - lol - thanks Andy.
Good Tuesday UNCLE MIKE - Brian here ! I always thought skateboards were a Death Wish especially Skate Board Parks - they keep Angela in a Job.
Love your Odd Ode it describes the cumulative effect of COVID 19 - strains A B & C and LOCKDOWN ! Please check *End of Lockdown ?* Thanks !
Blessings to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela ๐งก๐ค๐
The last thing Momma Penguin wants is to end up in A&E at the present time. Thanks Brian.
You are sir.. such an eloquent gent..
You flatter me dear friend.
Nah, tis true I tell ya..
Being a stranger is no easy task when asking locals the directions to wherever - arms and hands flying with dialogue to match so no wonder we resign in total abashment to finding our way on our own.......... hope this was near to the subject intended in the title.......... great write.
Spot on Fay although my primary thought when I started to pen this was a play with the language.
I guess the phone is out of battery or lost GPS signal.
Mines okay but my wife dropped hers down the loo - She won't be keeping it in her back pocket in the future - in the meantime she's lost and trying to sort out a replacement.
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