Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Fading
In knowing
Memories
Often fail
And
Bruises always
Fade
I had hoped
So very much
Indeed
To save
The essence
Of her
In those places
We once played
Such precious
Moments
Filled
To the very
Point of
Overflow
With laughter
Longing
Love and song
I cannot
For a moment
Now explain
Just how much
I wanted them
To go on and on ...
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Neville (
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A fine write Neville. Ya wishing my singing would fade away permanently?!
No.. not at all.. I thought you were miming... but hey... thank you anyway.... and truly
Neville
I know the feelings you have so well expressed here Neville. It certainly touched places and took me places as good poetry always should.
Your sparsity of detail with just enough guidance hits home, as it has done many times for me. A credit to your writing skills.
How very bloomin kind sir... I can not thank you enough DA,
Cheers Neville
You poem the long-ago feeling so well Nev. and can relate to each line 'cos affection of that sort does not really die.
I think as always dear Fay.. you may well be write... bless ya and true....
Neville x
Beautifuly penned Neville.
Thank you Michael, as ever much appreciated..
Neville
Very good write, so much meaning in so few words.
Andy
Thanks Andy, much appreciated and always welcome sir..
Neville
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