Goldfinch60

Each New Day.



Every day it happens,

Or so it seems.

I step into the shower,

The water streams over me.

It takes away the sweat,

The grime.

It also washes my mind,

Taking any worries,

Worries from the previous day,

Takes them away,

Leaving only good thoughts,

Good thoughts within me.

So I am ready to face the day,

Face the day with goodness,

The goodness that is with me,

That is always with me,

As each new day begins.

Comments10

  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.
    Aww, whey thy fly me to the moon and leave me there? They not want to hear my melodious tones.
    But we were already there in 1969, welcoming the first men on the moon. But we were the first there! Did we ever meet E.T.?

    • Goldfinch60

      E T had left as he heard you singing as we were landing.

    • Fay Slimm.

      A beautifully positive start to your day and a fine example to follow dear Andy.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, each new day is special.

        Andy

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        GUT MORGAN ONKEL ANDY ~ Great Song & Great Version. Angela & I have volunteered for Colonisation of Mars ! We tick all the BOXES and OUR BABY could be the first ET !

        He should have been a CARDNAL
        An ADMIRAL ~ A KING
        HE DID HIS very best fir US
        Now hear the People Sing !
        We*ll honour & exalt HIM
        And strew HIS Path with FLOWERS
        Hats off to ARCHEMEDES
        The MAN who invented SHOWERS !

        Much TRUTH in Your Poem
        Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
        Love Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !

      • Saxon Crow

        Hope you use soap! Good optimistic poem GF

        • Goldfinch60

          Of course I do - when I can get it!!

          Thanks SC, I am always an optimist

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          It is so very good that you take your good and positive feelings into the world each day. In our currently very troubled times, one wishes that such feeling existed in so many many more of our fellow human beings. The ugliness of racism and the apathy of the masses of apparently christian people witnessing it is truly saddening.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you d a, I m always positive.
            I totally agree with what you say about the ugliness in our society at the moment, and for those who believe, "Where is christ?"

            Andy

          • Michael Edwards

            Every day is a bonus.

            • Goldfinch60

              So very true Michael, enjoy every one of them.

              Andy

            • Andrew Charles Forrest

              I thinks this is why showers were invented
              It's like a fresh start
              A new pair of socks
              Clean sheets on the bed
              Opening the window on a cool morning
              Excellent piece Andy
              Thank you

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind Andrew, each new day is special.

                Andy

              • The Uneducated O.A.P

                Showers ? Washing? What's all that about then, can't be doing with that,takes too much time, and no problems with social distancing ! Nice one Andy, Bill

                • Goldfinch60

                  Time is the one thing that we have at the moment so I can shower for as long as I like, sometimes even five minutes!

                  Thanks Bill.

                  Andy

                • John Prophet

                  Very well said. These day’s especially we need positive ways to start each day.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you John, I always start each day in a positive way.

                    Andy

                  • Ternic73

                    I agree with John prophet well done

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Ternic, much appreciated.

                      Andy



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