Free Fall

Neville

Free Fall

Just because you are
on your way down

While there is time
mid your free fall
to clutch at straws

Why not choose to
reach for the stars ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 5th, 2020 03:55
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.

    • Neville


      Thank you but you need to be careful .. maybe you need to de-role

      Neville

      • orchidee

        I just fell off another clllliiiffffff…….. I'm having plenty of trouble these days, as you see! I only wanted to practice my acting skills, and they said 'Go jump off a cliff' Doh!

      • Fay Slimm.

        Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.

        • Neville


          Glad ya see it my way Fay.... x

        • Saxon Crow

          Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!

          • Neville


            trust me.. you wont feel a thing... thank you though regardless

            Neville

          • Michael Edwards

            Two way stretch - great shorty.

            • Neville

              Yes, indeed... Thank you Michael

              Neville

            • Andrew Charles Forrest

              Great message Neville

              Oh the regrets

              • Neville

                You too eh’

                Thank you my friend, stay safe n well,

                Neville

                • Andrew Charles Forrest

                  Oh yes they exist in us all my friend

                  Stay safe too

                • Goldfinch60

                  Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.

                  Andy

                  • Neville

                    sound advice Andy, and what a lovely thought you shared with me just now.. and for the reminder, I thank you truly..

                    Neville



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