Another 575

Michael Edwards

 

Electric current

A jolt of adrenalin

Feel the excitement

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 19th, 2020 01:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: Plus a photo of a new border in the garden.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 12
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments5

  • Fay Slimm.

    Am shocked with 575 excitement and love your new border Mike ....... gardens ares a place of enjoyment with chosen changes made over time.

    • Michael Edwards

      Still got quite a bit to do but it is looking good - thanks Fay.

    • dusk arising

      Hmm for me arithmetic and poetry should be kept a long way away from each other...... perhaps with an electric fence between, or maybe one of those electric shock collars around the poets neck.

      (No poets were harmed during the writing of this comment. If this comment has affected you in any way please consult this months edition of basic electric circuits for enthusiasts edited by D.C. Flashman)

      • Michael Edwards

        Electric fences can be useful - they can give you sparks of inspiration.
        Cheers dusk.

      • Accidental Poet

        Must look awesome after sunset.

      • MendedFences27

        Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a lot.
        Haikus and Senryus have broad subject matter such as Nature and Humanity. I guess everything else is your 575. I truly related to this one.
        P.S. - We have moved and I miss my garden. - Phil A.

        • Michael Edwards

          I would be like a caged animal without my garden - I've already wandered out in my dressing gown (it's a private enclosed garden) and it's still ony minutes after 7am.

        • Goldfinch60

          I touched that live wire
          it threw me up in the air
          I became shocking.

          Andy

          • Michael Edwards

            twiddle not the live
            try to avoid the neutral
            come back down to earth



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