Electric current
A jolt of adrenalin
Feel the excitement
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Plus a photo of a new border in the garden.
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Am shocked with 575 excitement and love your new border Mike ....... gardens ares a place of enjoyment with chosen changes made over time.
Still got quite a bit to do but it is looking good - thanks Fay.
Hmm for me arithmetic and poetry should be kept a long way away from each other...... perhaps with an electric fence between, or maybe one of those electric shock collars around the poets neck.
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Electric fences can be useful - they can give you sparks of inspiration.
Cheers dusk.
Must look awesome after sunset.
Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a lot.
Haikus and Senryus have broad subject matter such as Nature and Humanity. I guess everything else is your 575. I truly related to this one.
P.S. - We have moved and I miss my garden. - Phil A.
I would be like a caged animal without my garden - I've already wandered out in my dressing gown (it's a private enclosed garden) and it's still ony minutes after 7am.
I touched that live wire
it threw me up in the air
I became shocking.
Andy
twiddle not the live
try to avoid the neutral
come back down to earth
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