Selflessness

Laura🌻

Freeing myself from 

personal or selfish concerns—

 

Will allow me 

'to hear the music of ecstasy'

 

  • Author: Laura🌻 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 26th, 2020 06:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: After reading “Authentic” and “Where Music Takes Me”, I was inspired to pen a few words of my own. Thank you Andy and Fay for your inspiration.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 33
  • Users favorite of this poem: dusk arising, Accidental Poet
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  • Michael Edwards

    This is quite special in its simplicity - love it Laura.

  • Fay Slimm.

    You nailed the truth in only four lines dear Laura - a lovely read.

  • orchidee

    Good write Laura.
    But meanwhile - Oohh, don't bother, gal. You'll only hear me singing to that music! heehee.

  • dusk arising

    I really am such a big fan of the power of short pieces. Today you have excelled in this.

    A must for my favourites.

  • Neville

    I'm with them other guys & gall of course... must just add..

    although at first glance , these four lines may appear simple.. they are brimming with poetry and truth... and your acknowledgement demonstrates both your generosity and selflessness

    You just done good Laura, very good

    Neville

  • Accidental Poet

    It doesn't get any better than that. Great write Laura.

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    BUONA SERA LAURA - Grazie per Tua Poesia Elegante ! It sure is only when we subdue the noise of our own EGO - Que La Musica d*Ecstacia - filters through - Amen

    Bene e Pace ed Amore
    Abracci e Baci per Tu
    Amici Angela e Brian 💛💛💛
    Per favore ~ Please to check our
    Site & Fusion ~ GRAZIE A & B & S

  • Suresh

    Depth in simplicity

  • Goldfinch60

    That music of ecstasy can be within us all as can your words Laura.

    Andy

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    Andy and Fat are two great inspirations Laura and this one of your has inspired me to reach for the volume control today

    Thank you great write
    BRAVO!

  • ron parrish aka wordman

    may your heart soar with delight
    i hope you get well soon



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