Just Thinking

PoeticBiscuit

“It felt like a lifetime” is a funny phrase,

It seems so long but shortens with age.

 

Children would say we have many days

Elders reply to enjoy our time to play,

 

It’s all over before you even know it,

Is one of many commons sounds

 

But as kids we never truly understand,

And reply with crazy stares abound.

 

Here at my age I’m entitled to agree,

Time flies by like races at  the Grand Prix.

 

Wether you’re like minded or disagree,

Use time wisely cause soon we all leave.

  • Author: PoeticBiscuit (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 7th, 2020 01:13
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 38
  • User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.
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Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Time is precious enjoy EVERY moment.

    Andy

    • PoeticBiscuit

      Couldn’t agree more. Thanks for stopping by!

    • orchidee

      Good write PB.

    • Michael Edwards

      Make the most of every day - enjoyed the read.

      • PoeticBiscuit

        Live everyday as if it’s last is the saying, yeah? I’m glad you enjoyed as I enjoy you stopping by!

      • Poetic Dan

        O my days, now that was a dip in my tea! I tell you my friend you are legendary...

        Master with the words I wish to breathe 😉

        • PoeticBiscuit

          You’re far too kind with your words but thank you nonetheless. Always appreciate your visits my friend.

          • Poetic Dan

            Now that's the start of another write...

          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

            A superb poem on this fleeting life and time, I liked the clever comparison to the Grand Prix and the muse is good and true to life. Kudos.

            Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks

            • PoeticBiscuit

              Thanks for stopping by, I do hope to see you more !

            • dusk arising

              Where do we go though? There's got to be more. But i am biased being a believer in reincarnation a belief which was a part of christian faith until it was dropped approx a thousand years ago when the world was flat and the sun revolved around the earth.

              • PoeticBiscuit

                Is that not the age old question? If only we knew. I have no idea quite where I fall, I tend to look at them all in question. Only one sure way to find out and as this poem says, we’ll be there soon. Thanks for stopping by dusk, with such a thought provoking question!

              • Neville


                never waste a moment... enjoy every drop..



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