“It felt like a lifetime” is a funny phrase,
It seems so long but shortens with age.
Children would say we have many days
Elders reply to enjoy our time to play,
It’s all over before you even know it,
Is one of many commons sounds
But as kids we never truly understand,
And reply with crazy stares abound.
Here at my age I’m entitled to agree,
Time flies by like races at the Grand Prix.
Wether you’re like minded or disagree,
Use time wisely cause soon we all leave.
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Time is precious enjoy EVERY moment.
Andy
Couldn’t agree more. Thanks for stopping by!
Good write PB.
Thanks for reading Orchi!
Make the most of every day - enjoyed the read.
Live everyday as if it’s last is the saying, yeah? I’m glad you enjoyed as I enjoy you stopping by!
O my days, now that was a dip in my tea! I tell you my friend you are legendary...
Master with the words I wish to breathe 😉
You’re far too kind with your words but thank you nonetheless. Always appreciate your visits my friend.
Now that's the start of another write...
A superb poem on this fleeting life and time, I liked the clever comparison to the Grand Prix and the muse is good and true to life. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks
Thanks for stopping by, I do hope to see you more !
Where do we go though? There's got to be more. But i am biased being a believer in reincarnation a belief which was a part of christian faith until it was dropped approx a thousand years ago when the world was flat and the sun revolved around the earth.
Is that not the age old question? If only we knew. I have no idea quite where I fall, I tend to look at them all in question. Only one sure way to find out and as this poem says, we’ll be there soon. Thanks for stopping by dusk, with such a thought provoking question!
never waste a moment... enjoy every drop..
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