As black as my birdlover poet's pen ink hue upon hue
A rook and a raven flew and flew
when the wind it breezily blew and blew
and blustery became the view view view
An albatross then gracefully took to the air
and for hours it seemed to linger there
O' birds of flight your secrets tell
and if you know which of us
had end up in heaven or hell?
For isn't all is well that ends well?
Lets pray there ain't hell's murk
but Eden's light at the end of the tunnel!
For no evil one shall go to heaven
to enjoy paradisiacal life forever more.
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Author:
S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 7th, 2020 03:44
- Comment from author about the poem: Nature and spiritual
- Category: Spiritual
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BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
Hi Angela and Brian call me sister, I'm a lady, yes the holy Quran mentions birds adoringly too and I do luv luv them birds. I do a lot of birdwatching yeahh.
Thanks soo much for lovely great comment . Best wishes.
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
Hi poet, thanks soo much for a super comment, left me smiling, the italics yeah it perhaps goes with the windy imagery. You are another Don here right.
Um well yeah I sort of do copyright it unless I forget to. One poet on another site wanted to publish and sell my poems and someone said he wanted to profiteer from it so I told him I'm copyrighting them. Cheers and best wishes,
I Love and Respect your decision but as I am old and not looking to make money at this time I have just put out what I have paid dearly for in living life. Like I know you have or any true artist as it comes from life lived mostly in painful and extraordinary circumstances. Absolutely yes what I put out is meant for all to use freely so I do understand your position on this issue, as I would want no one to make money off of what I put out. Just Saying
Oh yes I am a Don too.
I do look forward to your further writes also.
You have a refreshing style all of your own which comes across so well in this superb write - great work.
Hi Michael, thanks soo much for nice cool comment, yeah one American and another English poet did say my poetry is an unconventional unique blend of forms which might not come off as professional but it is still entertaining and interesting as original and different. So I carry on, and honestly I don't realise how different and unconventional it is until I have written it and it might read off key but ah I can't help it that my meandering rhythm follows and obeys my muse rather than vice versa like professional poetry. Thanks again, best best wishes!
A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with the birds. With a good little thought at the end. Very well done.
Yeah you got it perfectly, my muse was really like flying with those birds some on tv and some in my yard. Thanks soo much for a nice super comment. Best wishes, take care.
That light will always be there for us and the love of birds will fly you towards that light.
Andy
Thanks soo much goldfinch, and I admire finches too, all birds actually. Your comment was artsy super in itself. Cheers and stay safe!
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