Poor Git
Ha ..
He only managed half a laugh
On that occasion
But ..
And look, it’s a BIG BUT
He was forced to give a cough
Or two instead
Before completing
What he had set out to do
And of course
Before it became
An eventual chore
Listen...
Another cough in the making
Half-hearted this time
And politely as per
The official manual
On Cross contamination
HMSO 2020
Then
Just before the angel hit
He thought she handed him a
Rainbow
The Coroner later said
His heart and eyes held out
It was his lungs that let him down
Poor git …
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A fine write Neville.
Aww, why they wish I would only sing half a song?! lol.
I guess it’s an unwritten secret.... are they still talking to you and if so... try doubling the dose... 😎👍
The sadness of life's endings. Life must be a physical symphony for all our organs or the percussion stops.
a truer word was seldom writ... they can't all be love songs can they DA....
I am in awe of your second sentence, as it speaks volumes to me.
The speed which cross contamination can hit is expertly poemed in this short but powerful verse - - the whole account sounded to me like someone you knew Nev - but then that maybe not true for your pen is adequate to write appealingly mere imagination. Whatever - - the read had such a compelling dose of poignancy.........x
................ Neva fear, twas all in me head ma'am a mighty big thank thee tho dear Fay.... x
Hhmmm - thank you for telling me and that is no surprise really as your mind is a cavern of inventive linguistics mon ami....................x
No serious subject, so fluently expressed.
a serious subject demanding respect, thank you Suresh, you are most kind...
Neville
Such a telling write Neville and sadly so very true.
Andy
sometimes it just has to be told as it is, doesn't it Andy,
Thanks for dropping in today.. Neville
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