Bodies, two, naked
Hard and firm
Ready, willing and eager
Heartbeat missed
Intake of breath
Tremble
Passion and lust flow
Skin to skin
Mouth over mouth
Lips on lips
Tongues search, love tasted
Fingers stroke, tease and play
Lick & suck, deep and wet
Hips on hips, entwined
Inside, slide within
Explore and feel
Fantasies whispered
Desire burns, heat intense
Amplified pulse, blood pumps
Energy sparks
Pleasure, pure
Beads of sweat
Hands gripped tight
Movement frantic, rhythmic thrusts
Nails scratch
Shrieks of exhilaration
Ecstasy, paradise
Bodies, two, release as one
Love
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Author:
DianeKey6 (
Offline) - Published: July 11th, 2020 15:15
- Comment from author about the poem: my first poem here on My poetic Side
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Good Evening Dion - Welcome to MPS - Thanks for your first Poem - very sensual ! Angela & I have been married four Months and share this site. Your elegantly penned Ballad rang many Bells ! Technically it should have been labelled *18* because we have Younger Members. Thanks for your comment on our Poem *A Walk in the Woods* MPS operates by reading each others Poems and commenting. There is no restriction on Subject (provided its not offensive !) or Style of Poetry !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela ~ SE England UK
Where are you currently based ?
An 18 rating - it’s just a poem with no rude words in it. Am I in trouble. Do you report poems of erotic nature? I didn’t realise I had broken rules
I am sorry
What do I do
Can I delete my poem so nobody is offended
Dionkey6 you are not in trouble your words should not be reported, please do not delete it. We do have erotic poems on the site so do not worry.
thankyou goldfinch as i dont know how to make it 18 anyway
Wow, this is some piece. Unfortunately, I can't remember what that is like (haha). Add a bit more information to your profile, and I might add you as a friend. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
I have to add more to my profile to be accepted by you for friendship.
I haven’t said I want to be your friend and I don’t like being told to do things to become friends
That’s a controlling attribute
I think I will just write my poetry thank you
Whoa whoa whoa. I did not mean it like that. I think you took that the wrong way. I meant that as a joke. I want to be your friend, but I would just like to know more about you. I am not telling you what to do. Still, I am just not friends with anyone. Clearly you have proven my point. ... respectfully.
Persistence is key
you seem a little picky with your friends and i would hate to dissapoint you so i will respectfully decline too. it says persistence is key but you arent very persistent about being friends - you are odd i think.
Maybe I am odd (haha). Well then, let this be our last meeting. That truely was a good piece by the way.
Persistence is key
Fine erotic write Dionkey6.
Welcome to MPS.
thats kind of you
Keep writing in your own style - this reads so well and I'm certainly not offended - nothing vulgar just sensuous and a good read. Keep posting.
Mr Edwards, thank you for saying that and i will keep at it - Diane
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