See Success.
Find the place where two entities meet,
stand on the edge of seen and unseen
and listen to Heaven speaking.
Awe speaks to lovers of nature's work,
watch carers re-transforming the earth
and see success for the sharing.
Authentic wonder needs self emptied
when love's spirit is being presented.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Out for another airing. this tribute to those working hard to help nature's wild things.Hope you enjoy.
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Good write Fay.
A dream of a write dear Fay.
What finer calling could there be than to assist nature. The natural world, so beautiful, neglected and badly abused by humanity.
Mankind in general seems to have turned it's back on nature's needs and our natural need for nature's ways. Not a play on words but actually how it is.
What was once symbiosis is become exploitation for monetary return. Mankind is now looking to the moon and planets with a view to plundering there.
I do feel out of tune with the aspirations of those in power and fear for the wellbeing of our future generations.
Once again your power through the written word brings forth strong heartfelt reaction.
simply too darn good for words dear poet...........................................................................................................................................................................
One line truly stunned me - "stand on the edge of seen and unseen."
A wonderful poem, Fay. Truly, such individuals that work to aid Nature do not get the attention they deserve. Loved it. - Phil A.
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening FAY - Thanks again for reminding us of the Truths in this elegant ODE ! Despite the World still being in LOCKDOWN in the grip of COVID 19 - All the things in Nature that bring us JOY are unchanging. The voice from Heaven - Human Love (we are all experiencing that in abundance !) and the uniqueness of Gods Cretion with every SUNRISE ! *And we say to Ourselves What a Wonderful World* ~ AMEN ! Please check our Poem about Mahatma Ghadi - Thanks. It is also posted as a Fusion ~ A FAY Poem on one of the Mantras would be appreciated ~ Thanks.
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela ~ Brian & Smokey Cat XXX
Un unusually simple, yet profound piece from you indeed.
Where the wave lap onto the beach, or the Sky announces the arrival of the dawn, are the merging of the two that I can reminisce.
Thanks Fay
Nature's world is so wonderful and your words do it so much justice.
Andy
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