Towards My Lover. Senryu. (Plus answer to coded Haiku)

Goldfinch60



 

My River so clear,

Flows so gently beside me,

Towards my lover.

 

 

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Coded Haiku.

Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – July 2020.

 

Rsvj fsu ntomhd epmfrt

Dit[todmh id gtp, fstlmrdd

Yjr dim dyo;; todrd

 

  

Each day brings wonder

Surprising us from darkness

The sun still rises

 

On your keyboard look at the letter in the poem and take the letter to the left.  On the first word of the second line I made a mistake and took the letters to the right.

Dove cracked the code.  Well done!

 

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 15th, 2020 01:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: My lover is there waiting for me.
  • Category: Haiku
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Comments6

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    GUT MITWOK Uncle Andy ~ ANGELA here. Love the MUSIC to start the day. Thanks for cracking the CODE - It looked familiar I often type like that when Im shattered. Id translated it from Serbo Croat ! Love todays POEM - Mention of the RIVER & LOVE again they are very contiguous ! WE got up early this moerning to catch Pole Position with MASQUERADE ! Do you find everyone wearing MASKS rather surreal ? We do - funny even !

    Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
    Love Angela - Brian & Smokey XOX

    • Goldfinch60

      Every time I put a mask on the police arrest me!

      Andy

    • dusk arising

      Stick to the path. Those bathing trunks no longer do you any favours.

      • Goldfinch60

        They never did d a.

        That path is always there for me.

      • orchidee

        I had it correct, except for the '['. Or am I telling porkies?!
        Good write Gold.

        • Goldfinch60

          Or are you still eating pork pies, I have missed them since Forward Poetry.

          Andy

          • orchidee

            Ahh, I must get more pork pies in. I been busy fussing in my marriage with KP. The River in my case is a stinking, stagnant stream, going nowhere! lol.

          • Michael Edwards

            A good bit of fun Andy - and that's what we need at the moment.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Michael, yes fun is what we all need at present.

              Andy

            • JeffBarnes

              I really like this! Am also glad to have the answer to yesterday's coded haiku. I tried to solve it but gave up.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jeff, much appreciated.

                Andy

              • Neville


                Beautiful Andy sir .. as was yesterdays coded haiku... I could not crack it, but well done to Dove...

                Neville

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Neville, most kind.

                  Andy



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