i
walked away
again
today
today
i
walked away
self preservation
i tell myself
again
i
walked away
alone
I
took it home
again
where
i don't
walk away
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dusk arising (
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Simple but emotive words d a.
Andy
Know the tune well.
yes a simple one which just fell together. simplicity works sometimes
I know you walked away from my singing, but there's no need to rub it in, by reminding me in this (fine) poem! lol.
I would like you to try gargling the communion wine for that voice,... let's start you on three bottles a day and see how you get on. we can up the dosage if needs be.
A telling write on self-preservation D.A. - - such a scent of sadness to the whole read.
just a simple little ditty which wrote itself... i have something more substantial planned for you tomorrow
dont walk too far as youll fall off the edge of the world. Great poetry. Favourite poem of my day.
i heard theres a pile of old books fell off the edge of the world, but some folk still read them LOL.
high praise from you thank you so much. i guess sometimes the simple writes hit the mark
Brill piece and a save for me.
I'm honoured ME. as i've said here to others, it wrote itself. Such a simple piece
They say
Home is where the heart is," but it's not always true. Home can be a lonely place without any love.. Yet, self-preservation is a natural instinct. And the battle goes on
A fine but sad write. - Phil A..
maybe refusing to allow oneself to walk a path which when previously walked led to heartache too many times
to draw the sword or cut the cord
nooo, this one's about avoiding the confrontation
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