moment of release

dusk arising



 

 

and in the red red wine
of that evening
in act of words unsaid
life began

       oh i was the pirate slaver
       you were the raging seas
       I then a ragged beggar
       in that moment of release

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 25th, 2020 12:46
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Comments3

  • Michael Edwards

    When I saw the title I thought this was a follow-up to my earlier posting. A little gem.

    • dusk arising

      I shall have to start posting toilet humour.
      There was a young man from Kew
      who came over all strange on the loo
      and oh my word
      as he strained on a turd
      there was such an unsavoury poo

    • Goldfinch60

      That release freed you to a wonderful life.

      Andy

      • dusk arising

        Life's ok but would be improved if i thought i could get away for a break...... but corvid makes tourists criminals.

      • Fay Slimm.

        A sliver of memory which intrigues more with each line - I love the draw of your first stanza and leave the read wanting more of that moment of release - another absorbing write D.A.



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