Sun Drops
as she dropped
from the sky
.... like a single
piece of golden
candy ...
the moon then
white
................ as
an empty page
... and
honeycombed
.... smiled down
... upon
the recently
... vacated stage
she left behind
though oh'
so very shyly ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Oh for the ability write short-line gems such as this one my friend. Full of engaging personification and loaded with need for the read to last longer I sit amazed at your talent for showing that less is more. Thanking you muchly Nev. for another example from which to learn.
You my friend are far too generous, but I must confess, I do kinda like it .. Have a super weekend Fay
Neville x
Is this the same gal you meet, or different gals?! lol.
... this one is about the sun going to bed and the moon shortly after, vacating hers to stand vigil ... and no.. vigil is not a bloke nor a gall say's I ... and ever so politely 🙂 Thanks tho for trying ya luck Orchidee 🙂
................................ Neville
All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it's charged with is so much more. From lunacy, to control over, fertility, luck, the wind. illnesses, and business, when all it really controls are tides. Your personifications of both the Sun and Moon bring new light to the changing of the day. - Great One - Phil A.
That is so much more than good enough for me .. Thank you Phil and truly ..
Neville
Can I echo Fay's comments - this a real pearl of a write - much enjoyed.
.............. as many times as you wish Michael ... many thanks indeed
... Neville 🙂
Super words Neville, two wonderful beings of light that give us so much happiness.
Andy
Thank you Andy.. very much and truly appreciated sir..
Neville
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