Changed.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Changed


You came along,
life started singing and I was the song.

 

Music of change
made me intend to learn giving again.

 

No changed to Yes
as passion desensitised moody stress.


One day I knew
needed new tango was dancing me too.

 

Time then arrived
when I fell in love with just being alive.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 20th, 2020 03:46
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  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful words Fay, just as being alive is wonderful.

    Andy

    • Fay Slimm.

      Yes you see the importance of just being alive dear friend. Thank you for reading my few words on Changed.

    • Neville



      There aint nothin quite like it is there our Fay... nothin at all .. exceptin poetry .. maybe .....

      a perfectly executed poetical consideration of the transient nature of sameness and constant change .....

      Neville ... x

      • Fay Slimm.

        You nailed it and thank you my friend - yes you saw through the metaphor to the core of why romantic interludes can change almost every negative mood - - - - - .or so they say.....................Fay x

      • dusk arising

        Romance refreshes the parts other kinds of rowing just cannot touch and before you know it yesterdays blues have capsized and you're swimming with the current.
        What a celebration!

        • Fay Slimm.

          And what a fine list metaphor you use with such skill....... a pleasure D.A. to read this comment that is in itself an admirable poem. Masses of thanks.

        • orchidee

          Good write Fay.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Thank you dear Orchi.

          • Michael Edwards

            And may you live forever posting poetry like this.

            • Fay Slimm.

              You honour my work with this generous comment my friend. Loads of thank yous.



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