Changed
You came along,
life started singing and I was the song.
Music of change
made me intend to learn giving again.
No changed to Yes
as passion desensitised moody stress.
One day I knew
needed new tango was dancing me too.
Time then arrived
when I fell in love with just being alive.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Wonderful words Fay, just as being alive is wonderful.
Andy
Yes you see the importance of just being alive dear friend. Thank you for reading my few words on Changed.
There aint nothin quite like it is there our Fay... nothin at all .. exceptin poetry .. maybe .....
a perfectly executed poetical consideration of the transient nature of sameness and constant change .....
Neville ... x
You nailed it and thank you my friend - yes you saw through the metaphor to the core of why romantic interludes can change almost every negative mood - - - - - .or so they say.....................Fay x
Romance refreshes the parts other kinds of rowing just cannot touch and before you know it yesterdays blues have capsized and you're swimming with the current.
What a celebration!
And what a fine list metaphor you use with such skill....... a pleasure D.A. to read this comment that is in itself an admirable poem. Masses of thanks.
Good write Fay.
Thank you dear Orchi.
And may you live forever posting poetry like this.
You honour my work with this generous comment my friend. Loads of thank yous.
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