is only one


and that my friend is

somewhat precariously balanced

on a heap of improbable coincidences





  • orchidee

    Good write Neville.
    Bit like 'Balancing on a razor's edge - painful that! I would rather balance on a tightrope.

    • Neville

      ................... thank you Orchidee.. I am a great believer in homeostasis :)

    • dusk arising

      Ha a cheap trick|! Just the sort of ploy one might expect in court with the accused alongside those in my post today.

      • Neville

        Having just read ya ... that was amazing sir ... only one thing, I have never received private payment for any of my services ... too many others do that ... Long live the NHS is what I say .... cheers

      • Fay Slimm.

        Yes the word "improbable" shot into my mind as I read your first telling words Nev - - sometimes methinks we are the pawns in the game of life my dear friend ........... x

        • Neville

          .................. I think so too ... bless ya dear Fay ... x

        • Laura


          An interesting write.
          Your agility to write
          vignettes is impressive.

          Thank you for sharing.

          Have a wonderful day.


          • Neville

            ................... life is a series of cameo's , is it not my dear Laura ... many thank you's to you 🌻

            • Laura

              Yes, indeed!

              You’re very welcome.🌻

            • L. B. Mek

              a Pyramid of truth you have shared, though like all truth's the angles are never as smooth if we zoom-in too close,
              creative structure

              • Neville

                ... I have more pyramids than Cairo L.B .. there is something very satisfying about them dont'cha think .. and therapeutic too

                Cheers my friend n true

                ... Neville

              • Michael Edwards

                Not sure what it means but it is so true. Well said Neville

                • Neville

                  ... I think if I chuckle any more, I shall lay an egg............. :)

                • Goldfinch60

                  Those improbable coincidences have been with us all our lives and have lead us to where we are now.
                  Fun write Neville.


                  • Neville

                    Good Sunday mane to you GF60 my friend & thank you kindly ...

                    ... Neville

                  • Andrew Charles Forrest

                    Excellent Neville

                    I don't think we could, any of us, stand the coincidences if they were probable though.

                    Far too fragile

                    And man will never invent a watch that never stops. Built-in Obsolescence ... You have to enjoy the dance you only get to put the shoes on once

                    • Neville

                      ... thank you Andrew .. not only for the visit, but also for those sage like words .. both so much appreciated ..

                      ... Neville

                    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

                      Hmm though I'm not sure what you are talking about but it makes me think of lots of different theories. So it is an awesome creatively ambiguous poem, great intrigue. Kudos for it!!!

                      Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

                      • Neville

                        Thank you my friend for visiting these words... much appreciated...

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