Compatible.
We pair of home-comers
built from painful baggage a water-tight dream,
we painted an idyll of walled delight.
A bright corner where care could cover old scars.
Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit of regenerative
pleasure which we dared to admit
into the picture of autumnal love.
Such easy laughter sparked need to spend more
new-found treasure in glad togetherness.
Fresh as youth the stream we dug from aridity.
Your tenderness stoked heat
in forgotten feelings, blazed pathways to places
I had never been
and seared heaven into every greeting.
So gentle our mountain
of unleashed freedom that time gave us chance
to climb new heights.
I thrived in sweet air of acceptability.
You re-sculpted sallow existence, blushed my
pallid future, accessed the girl inside
and unfastened this
latched-up former conformist.
You let loose love's abandon and I did not refuse.
Beautiful man your breath
warmed every fold of compatible essence, toned
any slack in my short-sighted outlook
and de-misted
smeared myopic signals.
Duo-passion oiled and honed rarely used action
so we could reach bliss.
Our union was something greater than physical
and that better otherness I shall
always remember.
No ocean of parting can break devotion's deep
integrity and I know for certain
we shall meet again.
Oh unforgettable man
you stole into destiny, enraptured my soul and
now you hold it forever.
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Fay Slimm. (
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'Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit
of regenerative pleasure
which we dared to admit'
'Our union was something
greater than physical
and that better otherness
I shall always remember.'
someday, I hope to greet poetry with words and rhyme schemes and depth, half - as delectable as your wonderous writes,
undeniably beautiful!
WOW !!! just flippin wow!!!
That feels really written from the heart and is so full of joyous contentment. Life's long journey traveled and along comes Mr Soulmate.
Along with this you've gained the certain knowledge that there will be another togetherness.
The whole reads like a wonderful story and has impressed me very much. I'm really envious.
Swoon.
Into my fav's.
Good write Fay.
ANGELA here - Good Evening FAY - Thank you for an unexpected & very loving Poem about COMPATIBILITY. I could write the same about Brian & I but - you have nicely preemted Me ! Thank You for sharing a Lovely Love Poem on Compatibility - Brian & I can empathise with every word & nuance ! When two Lovers are compatible there are no Boundries. Emotionally - Brian sure is an UNFORGETTABLE Man - who has enraptured my Body - Heart - Mind & Soul forever - AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace - With Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
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Wonderful write Fay so full of passion that has been with you for a very long time and will go on forever as mine and Joyce's will.
Andy
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