Notice of absence from L. B. Mek
'fare ye well' kind friends
'fare ye well' kind friends
inching close - Sun beamed strokes
flowing through slim curtain holes
blurred wrinkles within eyelid shutters
flushed red inside eyeball craters
winced agitations of hibernating lovers
stretched fingers roaming dishevelled covers
finding warm - comforting curves
tingling sensations of familiar nerves
quickly slapped hands dictating restraint
widely awake and murmuring complaint
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Author:
L. B. Mek (
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- Comment from author about the poem: a huge thank you to the talented Michael Edwards for the picture, do yourself a favour and add an extra smile to your day by visiting his page: https://mypoeticside.com/user-8282
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Comments6
A familiar picture your impressive pen paints behind many drawn curtains as morning is breaking.........very well stated L.B.
indeed a common scene, though only for a lucky few it seems sometimes
thank you Fay
Ah' .. moments captured eh' ... this is near perfect and all too familiar oh' and brought a smile to my face this mid mane ....
a keeper for sure .. wish I had caught it first sir ....
Neville
I'm not sure if its 'all too familiar-nes' is necessarily good or bad, lol
thanks Amigo
A great write as I've said before and I am indebted to you for your generous comments - now I've got something to live up to. And I'll certainly save the write.
first time I have ever corroborated on anything I have uploaded, this is a landmark moment for me and it was a privilege to work with someone of your calibre, glad you liked it
thank you!
Some people are just cranky in the morning. There will be no loving until they are all sorted out and feeling better. A cup of tea or coffee might have saved the day. A picture all too familiar to many folks.Well done. - Phil A.
so very true, where would we be without our morning beverages
thanks
This brought a big smile to my face LB, thank you for that.
Andy
well your comment did the same for me!
thanks Andy
Ha, well luckily the snoring moved us apart into our own beds! But I think I remember the theme of your write, these days I get cats clawing my feet as I awaken ,
Nice GLENIT Bee, From Michael,
lol, the 'luckily' in first line of your comment and 'I think I remember' in your 2nd line is what most people fear when the word marriage is proposed,
glad you could have some fun with this write and I agree Michael's Glenit accounts for 75% of the light-hearted element I was aiming for
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