L. B. Mek

rude Awakenings

 

 

inching close - Sun beamed strokes

flowing through slim curtain holes

 

blurred wrinkles within eyelid shutters

flushed red inside eyeball craters 

 

winced agitations of hibernating lovers

stretched fingers roaming dishevelled covers

 

finding warm - comforting curves

tingling sensations of familiar nerves

 

quickly slapped hands dictating restraint

widely awake and murmuring complaint

Comments6

  • Fay Slimm.

    A familiar picture your impressive pen paints behind many drawn curtains as morning is breaking.........very well stated L.B.

    • L. B. Mek

      indeed a common scene, though only for a lucky few it seems sometimes
      thank you Fay

    • Neville



      Ah' .. moments captured eh' ... this is near perfect and all too familiar oh' and brought a smile to my face this mid mane ....

      a keeper for sure .. wish I had caught it first sir ....

      Neville

      • L. B. Mek

        I'm not sure if its 'all too familiar-nes' is necessarily good or bad, lol
        thanks Amigo

      • Michael Edwards

        A great write as I've said before and I am indebted to you for your generous comments - now I've got something to live up to. And I'll certainly save the write.

        • L. B. Mek

          first time I have ever corroborated on anything I have uploaded, this is a landmark moment for me and it was a privilege to work with someone of your calibre, glad you liked it
          thank you!

        • MendedFences27

          Some people are just cranky in the morning. There will be no loving until they are all sorted out and feeling better. A cup of tea or coffee might have saved the day. A picture all too familiar to many folks.Well done. - Phil A.

          • L. B. Mek

            so very true, where would we be without our morning beverages
            thanks

          • Goldfinch60

            This brought a big smile to my face LB, thank you for that.

            Andy

            • L. B. Mek

              well your comment did the same for me!
              thanks Andy

            • Romantic Bloom

              Ha, well luckily the snoring moved us apart into our own beds! But I think I remember the theme of your write, these days I get cats clawing my feet as I awaken ,


              Nice GLENIT Bee, From Michael,

              • L. B. Mek

                lol, the 'luckily' in first line of your comment and 'I think I remember' in your 2nd line is what most people fear when the word marriage is proposed,
                glad you could have some fun with this write and I agree Michael's Glenit accounts for 75% of the light-hearted element I was aiming for



              To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.