Was it just a Dream

Dove

I just saw my reflection blink

Gazing down upon the stream

In tiny ripples of glittered ink

Oh, could it be just a dream?



I saw my reflection smile

Gazing down upon the stream

Cascading gently and mild

Oh! could it be just a dream?

 

Then spied my reflection dying

Gazing down upon the stream

My blissful eternal soul flying

Or was it just a mixed up dream



I saw my reflection finally fade

Gazing down upon the stream

My blinking last escapade

Before I drowned in my dreams 



  • Author: Dove (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 1st, 2020 12:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a silly write, my own rhythms and rhymes
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville


    I really like the progressive unhurried flow of these words .. from a blink .. to fading away ... so you can paddle another day .... 🙂

  • Dove

    Thanks Neville, this was another poem challenge “ I just saw my Reflection Blink”
    This is what it turned into! Thanks again for stopping by

    Take care

  • Fay Slimm.

    Yes unhurried and flowing slowly your verse depicts differing depths of dreams and love the girl in the pearl ear-ring you chose to accompany this enchanting rhyme - well done again D.

    • Dove

      Thank you Fay, the photo is one of my favorites along with the movie! Glad you enjoyed the read d

    • Michael Edwards

      The words carry you with them - super work.

      • Dove

        Thanks Micheal, definitely a flowing journey! Thanks for stopping by

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful words RB, may those dreams be always with you.

        Andy

        • Dove

          Dreams are dreams , thank you Andy! Smilez

        • L. B. Mek

          oh snap, we both mused on dreaming in our last posts lol,
          I like the angle of the picture and how it makes the pearl more prominent, somewhat like the pearl of wisdom your rhythmic lines are chasing to unmask

        • Dove

          Shall read your dreamy poem ! The pearl has a gleaming quality, a luster like a mirror! Yes her look has a mysterious quality, Wisdom flowing!

          Smilez

        • Neville


          a re-visit .. just because I can .. and because I think these words are more than worth it

        • Dove

          Well thank you kindly Sir Neville, and for you I give a double wink,
          Thanks for the second glance



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