Mr. Mediocre
Mr. Mediocre is a melancholy man
He is sad but not broken
He is down but not out
He wants to be someone’s friend
He’s just waiting for the shout …
I have been wronged so many times
But this is something new
It just hurts the same that’s all, he said
With love from me to you ……………… x
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Author:
Neville (
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Neville,
Hello friend!
Old or new, a hurt is a hurt when we ‘have been wronged’.
Nicely penned poem...no mediocrity there.
Have a wonderful Sunday.
Laura🌻
Good Sunday mane Laura ..
Many thanks for visiting these words ... it is wet and windy here , but other than that, I shall do my best ... and the very same to you 🌻
Thank you.
I’m looking forward to
a sunny fall day. 🍃🍂🍁
A fine non-mediocre poem Neville.
Praise indeed ..... thank hymn kindly sir ... is the message I've been asked to pass on ... and no .. no pass over jokes necessary ........................... 🙂
Hurt and feelin' alone "Mediocre" this man is certainly not - for with love in his heart he is a hero
- so before I rush out here is the shout and hoping he hears................x
Gotcha .. loud n clear Fay ... and he asks me to say thank you n truly ....
I'm always embarrassed when you write about me.
Do you think i should get out more?
A very entertaining and head scratching piece... i'm still thinking about it...
sometimes, only very sometimes mind, I wonder how ya know ... and nah ... not for a while .. not until they give us all the nod .... social distance is not to be sniffed at .... Cheers DA n truly ...
Great inky penloads N - muchly enjoylots.
Pon my wordly ... ya read justly like prof sir Stanley Unwin sir ... goodly to hear sir ... enjoyed lots n dearly ...............................................................................Neville 🙂
Oh oh....... the rain is definitely getting to you......... go read Kites because you are the inspiration for that..... I think you soar!
Awww how awfully kind of you dear Lorna .. I shall do that write this minute ... and thank you for checking in ...
... Neville
Dear M & M,
Being ordinary is nothin new
sadness seeps just like dew
just like dew drops softly blend
upon a rose’s petals ends
So shall your melancholy fade
And your sadness retrograde
Love is but a day away
May it find you today
May your hurts be released
And new friendships find you peace
................................... How exceptionally touching & he thanks thee and truly R B .....
.... NB .... not to worry folks .. respectable social distancing was maintained throughout the making of this response ....
... Neville
Some very profound words Neville but mediocrity is a challenge to all and with words like yours it has been overcome.
Andy
I am taught there is good in everything ... one only has to look for it .... I admire the way you seem to find it, at a glance... and without looking ................. Cheers GF60 ..
needs to be read a few times for its layers to be unravelled,
an abstract portrait
of a personality trait
we all unfortunately - know far too well,
great write my friend
Hey, you aint bad at this game at all, are ya ....
... Many thanks L.B...
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