The rain tumbles down
Streams over the countryside
Cleansing our lifetimes.
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Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Good write and pic Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Super write - I love this form.
Thank you Michael, strangely I find Haiku and Senryu quite easy to write, I may well get all the ones I have written together and see how many there are.
Andy
The rain is perpetual and gives us so much, not least among it's gifts is the gift of appreciating sunny days when the rain is out of mind.
Long may you enjoy the days ahead regardless of weather... stay at home and listen to some music when the weather is uninviting.
Yes the rain certainly does cleanse in this toe of Cornwall's south west - a relatable haiku dear Andy.
Great haiku and you picked fab music to go with it... I just love it. (If you like Lee Marvin ... have you ever seen Monte Walsh? One of his best)
Nice un GF60 .. and only people make us cry ......
BRIAN HERE ~ Bon Apres Midi Uncle Andy ~ love the VIDEO it should encourage ORCHIDEE that you dont have to be able to SING to get a No. 1 ! Love all HAIKU ~ SENRYU & TANKAS etc ~ so much Oriental Wisdom in so few words ! The Water Cycle is one of Mother Natures gret blessings ~ Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
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Andy,
Love your haikuās message.
We all need a good cleansing from time to time.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
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