Cleansing Our Lifetimes.

The rain tumbles down

Streams over the countryside

Cleansing our lifetimes.


  • orchidee

    Good write and pic Gold.

  • Michael Edwards

    Super write - I love this form.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, strangely I find Haiku and Senryu quite easy to write, I may well get all the ones I have written together and see how many there are.


    • dusk arising

      The rain is perpetual and gives us so much, not least among it's gifts is the gift of appreciating sunny days when the rain is out of mind.
      Long may you enjoy the days ahead regardless of weather... stay at home and listen to some music when the weather is uninviting.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Yes the rain certainly does cleanse in this toe of Cornwall's south west - a relatable haiku dear Andy.

    • Lorna

      Great haiku and you picked fab music to go with it... I just love it. (If you like Lee Marvin ... have you ever seen Monte Walsh? One of his best)

    • Neville

      Nice un GF60 .. and only people make us cry ......


      BRIAN HERE ~ Bon Apres Midi Uncle Andy ~ love the VIDEO it should encourage ORCHIDEE that you dont have to be able to SING to get a No. 1 ! Love all HAIKU ~ SENRYU & TANKAS etc ~ so much Oriental Wisdom in so few words ! The Water Cycle is one of Mother Natures gret blessings ~ Thanks for sharing !

      Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
      Love A ngela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
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    • Laura


      Love your haikuā€™s message.
      We all need a good cleansing from time to time.

      Thank you for sharing.


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