UNSAME (2)

Michael Edwards

 

 

I went to the crossroads and managed somehow

to calm them down gently, they’re all right now.

 

 

It’s raining down with colicky power

I hate getting caught in a baby shower.

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 29th, 2020 00:33
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    My first grin of the day Michael, thank you.

    How were your eyes after creating that image?

    Andy

    • Michael Edwards

      It's the concentration that's the worst bit of doing these. One line out of place and you've blown it.

    • dusk arising

      She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... she realised the letter spacing upon his door was incorrect.... all she could see was the rapist.

      Later she had her doubts about allowing a practicing surgeon access to her appendix. Had practice yet made perfect?

      Distracted and running late one sunday morning the very reverend Hardy was caught in bed and recited the sermon on the mount.

      Yes, I love our language both written and spoken.

      • L. B. Mek

        wow Dusk, glad I took a third/fourth look, at first glance that first paragraph is looking mighty bleak lol,
        somehow your comment matches Michael's picture so well, brilliantly witty

        • Michael Edwards

          Brill. thanks da.

          • Doggerel Dave

            Loved it Dusk A -Your third proposition appealed to my bawdy sense of humour .
            Regards Dave

          • orchidee

            Lol - Good writes and pic M.

          • L. B. Mek

            thanks for teaching me a new word Michael (colicky),
            I found this a revealing and brave write but those first two lines are reassuring, I truly hope all, 'will be all right', soon

            • Michael Edwards

              Nothing worse than a colicky baby - tis a great word. Yes all's well - J had the best outcome now for the follow-ups. Thanks for your concern.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in unsameness too......... thanks for sharing them.

              • Michael Edwards

                My pleasure - thanks for looking in.

              • FineB

                Hi Michael,

                A witty write.

                Great.

                Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
                FineB

              • Neville


                these unsame's are summat else .. as is the art work ... how do you do that .. the art that is ?

              • Dove

                Looks like one of my patchwork loom set thingies! Usually turned out as mitt , Awesome
                The funnies was cute, lol at DA ‘s therapist !

                Luckily colicky never hit my kids



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