Michael Edwards

UNSAME (2)

 

 

I went to the crossroads and managed somehow

to calm them down gently, they’re all right now.

 

 

It’s raining down with colicky power

I hate getting caught in a baby shower.

 

Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    My first grin of the day Michael, thank you.

    How were your eyes after creating that image?

    Andy

    • Michael Edwards

      It's the concentration that's the worst bit of doing these. One line out of place and you've blown it.

    • dusk arising

      She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... she realised the letter spacing upon his door was incorrect.... all she could see was the rapist.

      Later she had her doubts about allowing a practicing surgeon access to her appendix. Had practice yet made perfect?

      Distracted and running late one sunday morning the very reverend Hardy was caught in bed and recited the sermon on the mount.

      Yes, I love our language both written and spoken.

      • L. B. Mek

        wow Dusk, glad I took a third/fourth look, at first glance that first paragraph is looking mighty bleak lol,
        somehow your comment matches Michael's picture so well, brilliantly witty

        • Michael Edwards

          Brill. thanks da.

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        • orchidee

          Lol - Good writes and pic M.

        • L. B. Mek

          thanks for teaching me a new word Michael (colicky),
          I found this a revealing and brave write but those first two lines are reassuring, I truly hope all, 'will be all right', soon

          • Michael Edwards

            Nothing worse than a colicky baby - tis a great word. Yes all's well - J had the best outcome now for the follow-ups. Thanks for your concern.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in unsameness too......... thanks for sharing them.

            • Michael Edwards

              My pleasure - thanks for looking in.

            • The Uneducated O.A.P

              Thanks, you made the sides of my mouth reach my ears with a big grin.

            • FineB

              Hi Michael,

              A witty write.

              Great.

              Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
              FineB

            • Neville


              these unsame's are summat else .. as is the art work ... how do you do that .. the art that is ?

            • Romantic Bloom

              Looks like one of my patchwork loom set thingies! Usually turned out as mitt , Awesome
              The funnies was cute, lol at DA ‘s therapist !

              Luckily colicky never hit my kids



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