dusk arising

listen and lay back



sit now and relax
with a warm drink
of what satisfies
and listen
to the relaxation
of skilled musicians
playing sleepy
relaxation into
your weary bones.


  • Fay Slimm.

    Am on my way D.A. - - just the ticket for me today.......... love this slow read.

  • orchidee

    Good write dusk.

  • Michael Edwards

    Listening and beginning to fee----eel drowwwww - sy - ahh --------------zzzzzz!

  • The Uneducated O.A.P

    I listened while sawing wood, now missing 3 fingers

  • Doggerel Dave

    Followed instructions very carefully, then followed the trail to YouTube. What followed was the rabbit hole. Only follow that path with care. Follow me? Abandoned MPS for a small while. That will never do! Many thanks.
    (Perhaps a little too much of the warm drink that satisfies..)

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful words so fitting for the piece of music.

    Yet another musician you have sent my way da, I will have to listen to the album now.


  • Neville

    I never thought it would work .. but believe me, it just worked ..
    I take it my single malt might be regarded as a warm drink ... cheers,


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