Survive Limerick.

Goldfinch60



There once was a time in our lives

When we had a good chance to survive

But crowds in the street

Did not give a ‘sheet’

For those who wanted to thrive.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 2nd, 2020 02:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: Back to lockdown once more!
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.
    I got in a muddle. The sheet hit the fan, and got all tangled up in it! Doh!
    It's tricky, and difficult for traders of 'non-essential' goods and services. Hopefully they can survive, with online business, etc. But one can't get a virtual haircut, for example. Get that pudding basin on yer head, and get someone to cut round it. In the hair-style of 1066?

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, we will survive but must be careful.

      Andy

      • orchidee

        You hear me rattling about in the cupboard? Getting me pudding-basin out for haircut!

      • Neville


        How extraordinarily bloomin true sir... I have always believed that a combination of selfishness, ignorance and greed will likely be the end of us ...

        Neville

        • Goldfinch60

          Yes Neville it will be the end of us, why cannot people not see the problem.

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          On my TV are MP's imploring
          Stay at home even if it's quite boring
          but remaining erect
          whilst in self protect
          is my failure, I'm often found snoring

          So bored with the pandemic break
          Goldie is off to his lake
          it's my meditation
          is his explanation
          then swiftly nips home for some cake

          Or perhaps on another day
          sipping coffee in a favourite cafe
          where he'll knock one off briskly
          a poem quite risky
          just to hear what his subject will say

          When i see limericks i just can't help but start composing

          • Goldfinch60

            Good response d a, you know me well now, going off to coffee tomorrow maybe for the last time for a while.

            Andy

          • Doggerel Dave

            Yeh you folks aint the only ones - limericks make me itchy too:

            In a world of over population
            Perhaps thinning is not a bad notion?
            So long as it’s not me
            I’ll end it my way you see
            And I’ll never cause any commotion.

            My addition to the low mood. How low can we go?

            • Goldfinch60

              They do make you want to write don’t they.

              Andy

            • Doggerel Dave

              Music a compensatory choice.
              Many thanks for that, Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Music has always been my lifeline .

                Andy

              • AuburnScribbler

                A very pertinent and excellently written stanza Andy, let's hope that things get better by people being collectively sensible.

                Take care,

                Ben.

                • Goldfinch60

                  We can hope Ben, maybe one day people will realise their problems.

                  Andy

                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Andy. Thanks for showcasing OSCAR ! Every time I hear & watch HIM I learn a little more about the *Interpretation of Cool Jazz on a real PIANO !* AMEN. Brians DAD now has a Lowery Organ (same as they use in the Church) so He has given us his Rushworth & Drapers (Liverpool) Upright Grand ! Once tuned it stays tuned for ten Years ! Brian & I are fortunate to be in secure Jobs & being retired you can set Your Own Agenda ! WE support the Church *Needy* Support Group and the Coop Foodbank. WE feel perhaps that COOP Food Vouchers are the most sensible CMAS Gift this Year or COOP Hampers ? COVID 19 can knock us down - BUT - it will never knock us OUT ~ AMEN !

                  Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
                  L9ve Angela - Brian - Smokey 💛💛💛

                • Michael Edwards

                  back in lock-down once more
                  my bum wil get sore
                  lying here on the sofa
                  an idle bored loafer
                  with nowhere to go anymore

                  Well I had to have a go.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Of course, writing limericks is a disease, we all get infected by them.



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