Aperitif

Neville

Aperitif

 

Although it’s such a long way down

and even after all this time ……………

maybe

it’s not all that surprising ……………….

She still

tastes of sunlight rising …………………

and just

as hot as peppermints and green tea

she remains

yet to be slowly sipped ……………………

and correspondingly savoured ………….

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 21st, 2020 05:53
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Neville.
    All this about a pair of teeth?! lol.

    • Neville



      ............................ almost spot on Orchidee ... maybe, almost .. perhaps 🙂

    • dusk arising

      These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of familiarity and rewarding warmth of mutual pairing.
      Your well chosen words bring forth the sensual with a grace.

      • Neville



        ............... What a lovely compliment you have bestowed here upon my little scribble my friend .. Many thanks indeed and true ............ stay safe n well DA..

        Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that she is deeply loved - -- another example of tenderest versing my friend ................x

        • Neville



          ........ thank you for such words of encouragement my lady Fay... always appreciated and then some ... Neville

        • Dove

          Awe beauty from thy lips! Lucky gal! Beautiful poem

          • Neville



            .................. I am the lucky one RB ... thank you for visiting again today .. always appreciated ..

            ... Neville

          • Dasim

            Beautiful, just beautiful.

            • Neville



              ...............................................Many thank you's my friend.. muchly appreciated and true ...

              ... Neville

            • Michael Edwards

              And I let out a sigh - honest - super write N.

              • Neville



                .................................................. thank you Michael... so much appreciated my friend ...

              • RDS

                I absolutely love the sensory synaesthesia you create with invite with lines like:
                "She still

                tastes of sunlight rising"

                Pure and delightful thank you Neville one of my favourites.

                • Neville



                  How very kind you are my friend, thank you so much ..

                  All Good Things,

                  Neville

                • Christina8

                  Wonderful poem!! I had to look up "Aperitif" lol!! A refreshing read.....

                  • Neville



                    .................................................................... bless you my lovely friend n poet 🙂

                  • Clara

                    I'm with Micheal here, I also let out a sigh...

                    She still
                    tastes of sunlight rising

                    Wow. I mean, you just unlocked next level romance my friend.

                    • Neville



                      What an absolutely delightful thing to suggest .. many super big thank you's my friend .. you sure got me smiling ..

                    • FineB

                      A good write ✍ Neville.

                      Peppermint. Lovely

                      Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
                      FineB

                      • Neville



                        ...................................................Thank you my friend ... will certainly try ... and back at ya ...
                        ... Neville

                      • Goldfinch60

                        May that taste be forever with you Neville, she is very special.

                        Andy

                        • Neville


                          ....................... I think as a rule, we tend to meet very few people who fall into the category of very special, but I think I have been very lucky to date .... thanks for reminding me Andy ..



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