carolkirby1952

Caught You

Caught you in the moment but not in the movement

Caught you in the thought but not in the deed

Caught you in the omission but not in the lie

But I caught you !

 

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  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Carol ~ Welcome to MPS. It is a proactive sit & operates by Reading & commenting on each others Poetry ! Thanks for your first Poem ~ please check our site ~ Thanks A & B.
    Your Poem states a truism *Love is a tender trap* for Moment - Thought & Omission. Im 37 and got married (for the first time) to Angela (32) 8 months ago for True Love ! Thanks for sharing !

    Love Peace & Joy ~ Brian & Angela

    • carolkirby1952

      Ditto
      Brian and Angela. Thank you both for your warm greeting. I'm excited about publishing my poems and sharing and reading others. However I'm trying to learn my way around and figure out how to use this site appropriately. Congratulations on true love that you both get to share in this life what a blessing.

    • Michael Edwards

      A good one - and a big welcome to the site - it is really simple to use and look forward to seeing more of your work.

    • orchidee

      A fine write Carol.
      You caught me singing? Other poets may have. But they can't tell if it was me singing or two cats fighting! lol.
      That's all you gotta learn to avoid on here. heehee.

      • carolkirby1952

        Peace and blessings to you
        Thank you so much for your encouraging comment and I love your sense of humor

      • Goldfinch60

        Well you caught me in your words Carol.

        Welcome to MPS.

        • carolkirby1952

          Peace and blessings to you
          Thanks for your comment it's encouraging

        • L. B. Mek

          witty and with much more depth than its seemingly cat-n-mouse aesthetics,
          fun read

          • carolkirby1952

            Peace and blessings
            Thank you very much for your encouragement.



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