Space ground place


A boxing ring is where we go for fighting.

It's written in the feature, in added pressure and claustrophobia. Boxed in, roped to a knock out future or winner as the last man standing.

A nature reserve is somewhat similar.

By keeping it (separate?) here it preserves the vanity that man and humanity command the ground elsewhere.

  • Author: RDS (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 3rd, 2020 03:24
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 41


  • Michael Edwards

    Humour it is but there's more than a grain of truth in this great little write.

    • RDS

      Thank you for reading and comment on this little limerick Michael. I began by trying to say something serious about how spaces entrain our senses but, as you read it took a more profound turn!
      A kind of shoreline to the creative wave I've been riding lately.
      Hope you're in the flow my friend.

    • Goldfinch60

      There is truth in what you have said RDS.


      • RDS

        Ahh, there is s truth Andy but only for those who don't see. Thanks for the read and comment my friend.

      • orchidee

        Good write RDS.
        I lay awake some nights, ya know, thinking: 'What is the purpose of boxing? Two grown men or women bashing each other about?' Doh!

        • RDS

          From the boxers I've met or spared with they were all tough lads who found a skill, an outlet and a way out of hard lives and crime. Haha I can't say more as I am too sensitive to purposely hurt or injure another being. I can't even kill a fly without remorse! Thanks for stopping in for a read orchidee.

        • Poetic Dan

          Bit earlier from my brain to catch this flow but the point you make sits with my soul!

        • Neville

          ......... ouch.. the truth hurts dunnit
          and an intriguing analogy to boot ...

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