Goldfinch60

She Was Standing There.



I looked up from my computer,

She was standing there

Her silver curls surrounding,

Surrounding the smile,

The smile on her face

That was always there,

Was there for all to see,

But at this moment it was for me.

Her eyes full of love

Looking at me

Showing me that love in her

That was for me,

For me alone .

She came towards me

And came into my arms

Where we kissed.

That kiss so full of love

Love we had for each other,

That love had been there for so long

And had never failed,

And never would fail.

We looked deeply into each other’s eyes

And saw the love that was within us,

Within us for each other.

She took me by the hand,

We walked together away,

Away from this world

Into that place of peace and love

That is there for us,

Where we will be together for eternity.

Then I awoke,

With tears of love streaming down my face.

Comments11

  • orchidee

    A poignant write Gold. She is unforgettable.
    Meanwhile - my singing is forgettable! lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Orchi, yes she will ALWAYS be remembered.

      Andy

    • Maxine Smith

      Really emotional reading through this one Andy.

      You are right, she will always be with you.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Maxine, yes she will always be with me.

        Andy

      • Robert Haigh

        A heartfelt and poignant write, Andy. True love lasts forever, way beyond any boundaries of space or time. Sadly, some people never find such a love.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Robert, there are no boundaries with our love.

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          Of course she was there for you. Always there for you in days passed and always will be. Now, though you are physically apart, you know you are spiritually as one. And I'm sure you feel her watching over you, admiring your tenacity and being a comfort in those times of need.

          • Goldfinch60

            So true d a, we will always be together and be together for eternity.

            Andy

          • Suresh

            With each loving memory, a loving tear is shed, whose eyes won't well up with your words

            • Goldfinch60

              Most kind Suresh, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Michael Edwards

              A real heart wrench - my thoughts are with you this month Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Michael, this month will be hard but with friends like you to think about me it makes it easier.

                Andy

              • Jerry Reynolds

                Really good Andy. Evokes my great fear I will go first and Linda will be left to write the elegy. Sorry for your loss.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Jerry, I can understand that fear but it is a long way away at the moment.

                  Andy

                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  Angela here - Good Evening Uncle Andy - Thanks for one of our fave songs. That exactly how I always feel - about BRIAN especially when we are apart.
                  It is excellent that you feel able to share your infinite Love for Your Beloved JOYCE with all of US. Because She is eternally in your Heart it is no surprise that She will materialise in your dreams ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN

                  Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
                  Love Angela Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
                  Please check our latest FUSION *Christmas Presents* Thanks.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Angela, Joyce is always with me.

                    Andy

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    Angela here - Good Evening Uncle Andy - Thanks for one of our fave songs. That exactly how I always feel - about BRIAN especially when we are apart.
                    It is excellent that you feel able to share your infinite Love for Your Beloved JOYCE with all of US. Because She is eternally in your Heart it is no surprise that She will materialise in your dreams ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN

                    Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
                    Love Angela Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
                    Please check our latest FUSION *Christmas Presents* Thanks.

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    A heart-rending read of love which defies every parting my dear friend - - this time will pass and your darling will be with you again as in your dream.

                  • Neville

                    These are beautiful words Andy .. a magnificent tribute to your dear Joyce and a sure testimony to your unconditional and never ending love .. such anniversaries are never easy my friend and I shall be thinking of you and truly ....

                    Neville

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Neville, that love will be there forever and Joyce and I will be as one again.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        .................................................................................. have absolutely no doubt about it ...



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