Carbonito de Sophie

Neville

Carbonito de Sophie

 

Dear little bird

beautiful

Lavender, lilac and

blue

We thought maybe

you

Got lost in a fairytale,

but

Had no idea it was true

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 6th, 2020 02:16
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.

    • Neville



      can you imagine the kaleidoscope of rainbow colours that might ensue ........... cheers Orchidee ..

    • Fay Slimm.

      A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x

      • Neville



        despite my colours ... it seems you can see write through me ............................. bless you dear Fay ... x

      • dusk arising

        Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....

        ........ flights of fancy take me.....

        • Neville



          Sometimes, I feel like flying too .......... like write now ..............................

        • Michael Edwards

          A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.

          • Neville



            You got it in two ... Thanks Michael 🦜

          • Christina8

            What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x

            • Neville



              ................ serious thanks sent swiftly back at ya Christina ... x

            • L. B. Mek

              Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
              though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that's if 'they' would ever let her, to begin with)...

              • Neville


                I love the way folk variously interpret and read into words ... says a lot about personalities and perception .... bless you for taking part in this little experiment my friend

                Neville

              • Poetic Dan

                Looking through the looking glass does funny things, like when it's mushroom season! Then Alice finds the reason....

                Couldn't help myself! Great stuff good sir carry on

                • Neville



                  ............................................ how extraordinarily generous Dan.. I'll take a small punnet with a cherry on top................ cheers 🙂

                • Dove

                  Oh to be lost in a fairytale
                  where dreams come true
                  On the wings of a dove
                  dulce tones of “ I love you “
                  Lavender scented skies
                  But alas away she flew

                  Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
                  For the young at heart

                  • Neville


                    ................. that would be a fine thing wouldn't it .............. I thank you big and thank you true RB..
                    Seasons Best to You n Yours ............ take care and stay well

                    Neville



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