Carbonito de Sophie
Dear little bird
beautiful
Lavender, lilac and
blue
We thought maybe
you
Got lost in a fairytale,
but
Had no idea it was true
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Author:
Neville (
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Carbonito de Sophie
Dear little bird
beautiful
Lavender, lilac and
blue
We thought maybe
you
Got lost in a fairytale,
but
Had no idea it was true
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Comments9
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
can you imagine the kaleidoscope of rainbow colours that might ensue ........... cheers Orchidee ..
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
despite my colours ... it seems you can see write through me ............................. bless you dear Fay ... x
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
Sometimes, I feel like flying too .......... like write now ..............................
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
You got it in two ... Thanks Michael 🦜
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
................ serious thanks sent swiftly back at ya Christina ... x
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that's if 'they' would ever let her, to begin with)...
I love the way folk variously interpret and read into words ... says a lot about personalities and perception .... bless you for taking part in this little experiment my friend
Neville
Looking through the looking glass does funny things, like when it's mushroom season! Then Alice finds the reason....
Couldn't help myself! Great stuff good sir carry on
............................................ how extraordinarily generous Dan.. I'll take a small punnet with a cherry on top................ cheers 🙂
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of “ I love you “
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
................. that would be a fine thing wouldn't it .............. I thank you big and thank you true RB..
Seasons Best to You n Yours ............ take care and stay well
Neville
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