He's one hell of a gizza, someone who makes me feel proud! Knows how to carry thoses worries into a cloud, deal what's left later and you'll know that spirit is in us all!
Yes! I've known him from when I saw him kiss my older sister, now I visit and our kids are past that age, he's now even drive! Yet we are both doing it again apparently past our prime, age is but a number you'll see we both define!
Of course to end it all he had to be a Dan! One you'll never forget and we are up and down the land, here in the UK and all over the place! this is shout out to the first one I met that help me on a journey to be all of me I can be!
Finding my way through poetry, to a freedom all can see.
When no hidden emotions let the world breathe!
Before my insecurities stress and frustration burn my candle out of existence, I need to remember to not take this all personal.
Yet the responsibility of emotions makes it never simple, when the balance and structure needed can make freedom feel impossible....
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I've stayed in my home town for the weekend, saw a dear friend that not seen for a long time and love when it still feels like yesterday! Then like always this Poetic tribe inspired my thoughts and rebalance my energy so another shout out to Maxine, may the dark and the light be a service to us all. Much peace and respect, keep up the write!
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IT is so good to see you this way Dan may your worries be truly behind you and your life be the wonderful place it now is forever.
Andy
It's fantastic to be more than I've ever been before, like the last roots are dugout and I'm feeling it all to my core! I'm following my plan and that's forever changing!
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as if we were turned inside out and able to show our most vulnerable to the world.
And of course if the world says 'that's beautifu;l' then we may relax about ourselves.
So, in a word Dan 'relax' mate.
What a perfect way to end reading the most precious comments!
Always straight to the point, hitting that nail on the head....
"relax" trust all that is and will be!
Powerful write and may poetry always be there for you.
For as long as I recognise it, I'm sure it will always appreciated my friend.
good write, you never shirk from telling it as it is - always, so refreshing
As are genuine vibrations like yours my friend, keep it real!
Much peace and respect
Hope you like my next little outlet 😉
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