In a Moment of Poetry #2

Neville

In a Moment of Poetry #2

 

She lends him a calm

Like she did on

Old fashioned Sundays

Whilst

Laid back and watching

Those vintage

Black and white movies

Then

Drinking green tea

Made in 

A real china tea-pot …

Although while it was

Brewing  

His cool calloused fingers

Traced

Infinite patterns across

And beyond

Those faint Indentations

That her 

Camisole hem left behind

Indeed

Those he ran round

Her hips

With a feeling of relish

And which

She ever so welcomed   

Enticing a purring and

Parting  

Of those perfect pink lips

So, he stirred in some

Honey   

To be sipped with a passion

While resting

His head on the flat of her

Belly  

Upon which … both were

Consumed in a subsequent

Moment of sheer poetry …

 

The End …………………………x

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 29th, 2020 04:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: .................................................................................................................... This version tastes better to me .................
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  • Suresh

    I had to read the first one, and I am not the one to disagree with you, the romance is indistinguishable

    Very very enjoyable

    • Neville



      ............... thank you my friend, a welcome and as always, much appreciated visit ... ....

    • Fay Slimm.

      The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a moment of poetry.......... another sigh of a read my evocative friend.

      • Neville



        ............................ thank you dearly, dear Fay .. how kind you are my friend ... hope the shoulder is easing up ...

      • orchidee

        Good write N.
        Is there a cat in this poem - purring?!

        • Neville



          .................. lest I digress, I'll tell ya quick ... she's a tigress .. now dont that make ya sick 🙂

          • orchidee

            A cougar? And what am I doing, knowing about them? Have I met any, or only the ones in zoos?! lol.

            • Neville



              .................. she's all paws ...

            • L. B. Mek

              'His cool calloused fingers
              Traced
              Infinite patterns across
              And beyond
              Those faint Indentations'
              these highlighted lines, reemphasis your chosen format for delivering your poetic words, as we too: delve in and out of such relatable moments of realised yearning, distilled with such poetic ease,
              another firm favourite of subtlety's delectable poetry you've penned my friend,
              thanks for finding the time and energy to share during what must be a busy time of year for you,
              🍻

              • Neville


                Thank you my dear friend for calling in on me and considering these words .. Your comments are far too generous but of course welcome and as ever, so very much appreciated ..

                I must confess, I have been rather busy of late, both on the home front and workwise ... am looking forward to standing down in the near future .... Take care now and stay safe .......... N

              • dusk arising

                You really do have a wonderful way of providing poetry which entices your reader into their own world of picture creation. Somehow you combine love, lust, humour, devotion and a cuppa and most important of all..... a smile upon your readers face.

                I really enjoy your style and todays piece is a wonderful example. Took me on a journey, a very enjoyable journey.

                • Neville



                  .................. I could easily say the very same about you my friend ... indeed, I have often thought it... nevertheless, it is always good to be appreciated .............................thank you DA, Neville

                • Jerry Reynolds

                  Beautifully sexy.

                  • Neville



                    ........ Cheers Jerry
                    ............................................. Neville

                  • Michael Edwards

                    This captivated me and I love LBs chosen lines - keep safe Neville.

                    • Neville



                      ........................ Thank you Michael and you too my friend ...
                      ... Neville

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Such a wonderful romantic write Neville.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        ............................................. thank you my friend, so very much appreciated as always...
                        Neville



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