In a Moment of Poetry #2
She lends him a calm
Like she did on
Old fashioned Sundays
Whilst
Laid back and watching
Those vintage
Black and white movies
Then
Drinking green tea
Made in
A real china tea-pot …
…
Although while it was
Brewing
His cool calloused fingers
Traced
Infinite patterns across
And beyond
Those faint Indentations
That her
Camisole hem left behind
…
Indeed
Those he ran round
Her hips
With a feeling of relish
And which
She ever so welcomed
Enticing a purring and
Parting
Of those perfect pink lips
…
So, he stirred in some
Honey
To be sipped with a passion
While resting
His head on the flat of her
Belly
Upon which … both were
Consumed in a subsequent
Moment of sheer poetry …
The End …………………………x
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Author:
Neville (
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I had to read the first one, and I am not the one to disagree with you, the romance is indistinguishable
Very very enjoyable
............... thank you my friend, a welcome and as always, much appreciated visit ... ....
The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a moment of poetry.......... another sigh of a read my evocative friend.
............................ thank you dearly, dear Fay .. how kind you are my friend ... hope the shoulder is easing up ...
Good write N.
Is there a cat in this poem - purring?!
.................. lest I digress, I'll tell ya quick ... she's a tigress .. now dont that make ya sick 🙂
A cougar? And what am I doing, knowing about them? Have I met any, or only the ones in zoos?! lol.
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'His cool calloused fingers
Traced
Infinite patterns across
And beyond
Those faint Indentations'
these highlighted lines, reemphasis your chosen format for delivering your poetic words, as we too: delve in and out of such relatable moments of realised yearning, distilled with such poetic ease,
another firm favourite of subtlety's delectable poetry you've penned my friend,
thanks for finding the time and energy to share during what must be a busy time of year for you,
🍻
Thank you my dear friend for calling in on me and considering these words .. Your comments are far too generous but of course welcome and as ever, so very much appreciated ..
I must confess, I have been rather busy of late, both on the home front and workwise ... am looking forward to standing down in the near future .... Take care now and stay safe .......... N
You really do have a wonderful way of providing poetry which entices your reader into their own world of picture creation. Somehow you combine love, lust, humour, devotion and a cuppa and most important of all..... a smile upon your readers face.
I really enjoy your style and todays piece is a wonderful example. Took me on a journey, a very enjoyable journey.
.................. I could easily say the very same about you my friend ... indeed, I have often thought it... nevertheless, it is always good to be appreciated .............................thank you DA, Neville
Beautifully sexy.
........ Cheers Jerry
............................................. Neville
This captivated me and I love LBs chosen lines - keep safe Neville.
........................ Thank you Michael and you too my friend ...
... Neville
Such a wonderful romantic write Neville.
Andy
............................................. thank you my friend, so very much appreciated as always...
Neville
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