Winnow the Wind

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Winnow The Wind.


Soft as the cobwebs that dance the vine.
Sweet as the droplets that dew the rose.
Warm as the first taste of fruity red wine
Is love which once relished sturdily grows.

 

Harsh as raw winds in the willow's branch.
Cold as the mountain stream's winter flow.
Dry as the drought that wilts any romance
Is life when empty of love's felt under-tow. 

 

So winnow the wind divide chaff from grain.
     Refine frozen gold then grasp love's flame.      

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 5th, 2021 04:25
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Suresh

    True love is oblivious to harsh realities, for it embraces even a sliver of hope and positively thrives when one 'winnow the wind' as so romanticized by your words

    • Fay Slimm.

      A bundle of thank yous Suresh for your read and comment on Winnow the Wind - - delighted you found the piece positive on the subject of love.

    • L. B. Mek

      Indeed, so true and timely
      as ever, beautifully penned!
      Happy New Year dear Fay!

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thanking you for your visit and encouraging comment L.B. - and a Happy New Year to you too.

      • orchidee

        Good write Fay.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Thank you dear Orchi.

        • Amon

          Sweet as the droplets that dew the rose.
          UMMM
          Stay safe madam Fay, I need you to live through to next year and many more coming, that we keep enjoying such soothing words of yours again and again, keep sharing.

          • Fay Slimm.

            What an upbuilding set of wishes for not only my safety but for my continuing efforts to write readable poetry - I am sincerely humbled and thanking you masses Amon - --

            • Amon

              Always welcome

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Good writ Fay

              • Fay Slimm.

                Thank you Jerry and so glad you enjoyed the read.

              • Michael Edwards

                Super penwomanship Fay - as always.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Ah - - bless ya for dropping by for a read Mike - -- glad you got the gender correct in that deeeelishushly impressive title my friend.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Loves flame is always there and will always light our way.

                  Andy

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    That is so true my friend - thank you for your visit and read.



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