Michael Edwards

IN THE FORMAT (3)

 

 

 

Tears slowly welling

I attempt to suppress them

A fight never won.

Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Very, very good Senryu Michael, that is going into my favourites as it is so true.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write and pic M.

  • Fay Slimm.

    such an appealing Sen my friend - - and the artwork is simply superb.

  • dusk arising

    Thoughts ever return
    to a light ever dawning
    perpetuity.

    • Michael Edwards

      And my handkerchief's all wet. Ta dusk.

    • Jerry Reynolds

      Beautiful Water Color and poem.
      Wish I were there.

      • Michael Edwards

        Thanks Jerry - It's Kibworth - another village close to mine - about 8 miles way.

      • L. B. Mek

        beautifully sincere words - to match
        your artwork's scene
        of that everyday serene
        we take for granted: too quickly...
        a wonderful read Michael, hope this is merely an expression of Artistry and all is well my friend,

      • Neville



        Well said Michael .. join the club sir ..



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