Tears slowly welling
I attempt to suppress them
A fight never won.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: January 7th, 2021 01:06
- Category: Unclassified
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Tears slowly welling
I attempt to suppress them
A fight never won.
Comments7
Very, very good Senryu Michael, that is going into my favourites as it is so true.
Andy
That's really kind - thanks Andy.
Good write and pic M.
Lotloads of ta muchlies O
such an appealing Sen my friend - - and the artwork is simply superb.
You're so kind - thank you Fay.
Thoughts ever return
to a light ever dawning
perpetuity.
And my handkerchief's all wet. Ta dusk.
Beautiful Water Color and poem.
Wish I were there.
Thanks Jerry - It's Kibworth - another village close to mine - about 8 miles way.
beautifully sincere words - to match
your artwork's scene
of that everyday serene
we take for granted: too quickly...
a wonderful read Michael, hope this is merely an expression of Artistry and all is well my friend,
Well said Michael .. join the club sir ..
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