Dark or light
Fantasy or fiction
All poetry is life
Given from our conviction
Within our minds
There's an ability to do all
Walk on cloud nine
Or bitterly dig & crawl
An energy that's recharging
Or given out in abundance
Drifting in a river of conscious
To become all or nothing
From the moments silence
Peaceful or violence
Each one was guided
To use as blueprint
Of a love undefined yet!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just doing what I do inspired by all of life and of course most importantly you!
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May that love be with us all and the world will become a better place.
Good words Dan.
Andy
Yes was definitely a great way to start my morning, always easier written than done but I guess we are all trying to practice what we preach!
Always appreciate your visit to help me keep up my best beat!
Good write Dan.
Always appreciated my friend!
If every one of us could use that energy you describe but in a wholesome and positive way then our world, our home, would see such a wonderful change.
I say it alot my friend, every one should walk a pack of dogs! (properly) I got told I looked like I was in a movie the other day, all 4 dogs walking perfectly with me... I think now I know why it feels so good and may try to put into words!!
Always appreciate your time
Very nice indeed.
Always appreciated
A perceptive look at linguistic energy Dan - - yes Poetry is indeed life and your verse captured the depth so precisely .
Linguistic energy! Yes that's what it is, always leave me with the biggest of smiles each time you comment!
Thank you so much..
Yes I enjoyed the read - nice one Dan.
Lol. I did actually shock myself with this one...
Always appreciated my friend
Nice poem Dan and tied up nicely on the last line. I've met a lot of different people and got to thinking people either grew up with the presence or an absence of love...real thoughtful stuff mate.
J
Yeah I get that, credit to another poet for inspiring my first few lines...
No matter the past, together we can lay out a map to fix a broken heart! I have no shame because it was the reason I joined this site!
Keep fresh my friend...
thought provoking words my friend,
inclusive of those opposing extremities within reality,
yet still undeniably sang with a positive perspective's yield of self-mined prudence, choosing to believe in our ability to dictate and govern what fates: we are faced with,
a wonderful read
Thank you for starting the ripple off, I can't believe where it went and that it comes so easily in my mind!!
I guess it's more to do with the mirror in front, so now neither of us should doubt ourselves to much 😉
Keep letting it go from the soul!
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