under the pier
taste of her kisses
wind and salt
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Author:
Jerry Reynolds (
Offline) - Published: January 14th, 2021 08:41
- Category: Love
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under the pier
taste of her kisses
wind and salt
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Comments7
Good write Jerry.
Thanks Orchi
A potent read Jerry - this clever three liner must rise from experience -methinks - - great stuff.
Ya thinks right Thanks
Yes, I can feel the wind and taste the salt. Well done
Thank you Suresh
To be a chef here's where you start:
wind and salt
a seasoned fart
Very good Michael a DorothyParker twist.
Wonderful times Jerry.
Andy
ok please don't take offence or judge me too harshly, but do feel free to cringe: your words took me back to Summer romances and a song by Dan & Shay titled 'nothin like you',
what a wonderful gift of reminisced romance, you've gifted with these unassuming words
Thanks, L.B.
Luv it!
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