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Untitled XXXV

The soul inhabits the habit
The habit the soul inhabits

Is it the age old question?
Or the old age question?


  • Fay Slimm.

    Loud applause for this gem of tongue-twister Suresh - a super write.

    • Suresh

      Much appreciated

    • Neville

      I near fell from my stool trying to bend my mental muscle and tongue around 'the soul inhabits ...
      You are the undisputed master of these little snippets .......

      • Suresh

        Thnx for painting a visual that cracked me up.

      • dusk arising

        Clever stuff beyond doubt.

        • Suresh

          Many thnx

        • orchidee

          Good write Suresh.

        • Michael Edwards

          It's both - or they're both
          if only I were more knowledgable - now I've come over all subjunctive.

          • Suresh

            If you are doubtful of your knowledge, then I am left with no alternative but to claim total illiteracy

          • Goldfinch60

            Clever words Suresh.


          • L. B. Mek

            ha! well you had me staring blankly at the screen for a few minutes after reading...
            thought provoking or silencing, depending on the limitations of our intellect...
            a wonderful gem you've penned

            • Suresh

              Thnx for engaging

              • Poetic Dan

                Glad I was not the only one... Silence! Then boom...

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