Two Hopes for Thee

Neville

Two Hopes for Thee

 

 

One day I hope you realise

The sky is only dark at night because

You have your blue eyes closed

…

When your feet eventually touch the ground

I hope you find all those sharp rough-edged shapes

Are really smooth and round

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 16th, 2021 05:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    Good write N.
    Is this about a gal? If so, should I meet her? Or have I met her? lol

    • Neville



      .................. Cheers Orchidee .. Maybe ... 🙂

    • dusk arising

      Light and shade and our perception. Yet you refreshingly bring feminine beauty along to colour the world too.

      • Neville



        .......... Thanking you is always easy DA ... because you make it so .............. Cheers my friend ..

        Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        Two caring wishes for some special person and poemed so well - what a lovely first read of my day...........x

        • Neville



          Thank you Fay .................... x

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Love with my coffee. Thanks Neville.

          • Neville



            ........................................ thank you Jerry and very muchly too sir ....

          • FredPeyer

            Very well said, Neville!

            • Neville



              ........................................................................ Cheers Fred ................. Neville

            • orchidee

              I suppose I could use 'thee' and 'thou' more in me hymns! Sometimes to get round non-rhyming words.
              And also add 'est', such as in knowest, takest, etc. Then I gotta count the syllables carefully if I do, as the 'est' gives an extra syllable.
              Do shut up waffling now, Orchi! lol

              • Neville



                ................... I quite like thine .. but I know what ye mean ..

              • Michael Edwards

                A couple of great stanzas Neville.

                • Neville



                  .................. thank you Michael .. much appreciated my friend ...
                  Neville

                • Goldfinch60

                  May those blue eyes open and see the smooth ground ahead that is there in life.

                  Andy

                  • Neville



                    ..................... cheers Andy .. absobloominlutely my friend .............

                  • Christina8

                    What a sweet write.....I really like this one a lot!...C

                    • Neville



                      .............................................. that's another bloomin BIG THANK YOU on its way to your door ..



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