Two Hopes for Thee
One day I hope you realise
The sky is only dark at night because
You have your blue eyes closed
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When your feet eventually touch the ground
I hope you find all those sharp rough-edged shapes
Are really smooth and round
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Neville (
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Good write N.
Is this about a gal? If so, should I meet her? Or have I met her? lol
.................. Cheers Orchidee .. Maybe ... 🙂
Light and shade and our perception. Yet you refreshingly bring feminine beauty along to colour the world too.
.......... Thanking you is always easy DA ... because you make it so .............. Cheers my friend ..
Neville
Two caring wishes for some special person and poemed so well - what a lovely first read of my day...........x
Thank you Fay .................... x
Love with my coffee. Thanks Neville.
........................................ thank you Jerry and very muchly too sir ....
Very well said, Neville!
........................................................................ Cheers Fred ................. Neville
I suppose I could use 'thee' and 'thou' more in me hymns! Sometimes to get round non-rhyming words.
And also add 'est', such as in knowest, takest, etc. Then I gotta count the syllables carefully if I do, as the 'est' gives an extra syllable.
Do shut up waffling now, Orchi! lol
................... I quite like thine .. but I know what ye mean ..
A couple of great stanzas Neville.
.................. thank you Michael .. much appreciated my friend ...
Neville
May those blue eyes open and see the smooth ground ahead that is there in life.
Andy
..................... cheers Andy .. absobloominlutely my friend .............
What a sweet write.....I really like this one a lot!...C
.............................................. that's another bloomin BIG THANK YOU on its way to your door ..
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