WOKED
Yesterday:
I woke up early feeling surly
for I’d been fast asleep
Today:
I woke up late feeling great
for I’d been slow asleep.
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Michael Edwards (
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I woke up early
And found these words
And saw the painting
I am off to a good day.
Andy
You didn't woked then - it's good to wake - you know you're still alive.
Good write and pic M.
How is Miss B's sleep? Does she count syllables to get to sleep, instead of sheep?
No she counts Ara Berles 'cause they stay where they are planted and are easier to count.
D'you ever wonder on opening yer eyes
How sleeptime lingers or sometimes flies
then the brain recovers
as you throw back your covers
and the missus farts as soundly she lies
I like the somber tone to the bright water colours you've utilised, especially framed by that grey - as if a reminder, that just beyond this listless dreary days of Winter: our months of Spring and Summer await our arrival with muted anticipation.
Let all do our best to say safe and once more experience: Nature's blossoming seasons...
a wonderful artwork Michael, subtle - ever so subtle,
Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of welcome wit from your clever pen Michael - --- it well describes my nightly trials too.
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